@Steven I think it made more sense when I did the gesture drawing. And yeah I know I usually draw her with a melancholy face. >w>

Anyway, this is the last I'm doing for today. Just the outline and the flat colors, no shading. I'll resume next time I can.

Her head seems to be a little big no?

It looks big from the relationship to the shoulders, because they're moving back into space on the z-axis while you're seeing the head from a frontal view. If the torso were at the same angle as the head, it would be wider and match up properly.
Ex:


Also the hair probably doesn't help make it look smaller since I tend to draw hair really poofy. >w>

More progress.


EDIT: Finished I think?

And one last thing for now:

It's nice and all but maybe you could vary more with your expressions.

With those two it wouldn't be as in character to have other expressions :U

However, there's now this:

dem ABS *stares*

<.<

yo draw a dinosaur chowing down on some kfc

wut. well okay I'll see how that'll work out.

Also a few more since I had some more time to practice:

The face of the first one doesn't really seem to match with the slightly tilted position of the head imo.

The middle one is my favourite, it looks like that SnK character whose name I don't know.

Jean Kirstein mah boy

I like the last one face expression a lot

Nah, I ment Mikasa

huh? but you said middle one so I thought you were talking about yamato