Author |
Message |
Masky
Joined: Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:03 pm Posts: 736 Location: 7th Street, Purgatory
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Resident Evil 6, SoulCalibur V, Slender: The Arrival, Minecraft
|
First off, I'd like to say that any good critique is nice to see, and I will be updating to add more. The files will be large, so you'll wanna wait if ya got a slow computer. I upload to my dA a lot, so...yeah...
_________________ What? That old guy? SmasherLink's no longer here, b****! The username is under new control! The name's Masky, and don't wear it out!
|
Thu Mar 14, 2013 8:30 pm |
|
|
<Awesome>
Joined: Fri Sep 28, 2012 12:02 pm Posts: 1529 Location: the 6th dimension Country:
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: 3ds
|
cool i'm not really an expert on these things but the guy at the left-bottom corner has a weird body shape
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 4:13 am |
|
|
rexos
Joined: Fri Feb 25, 2011 4:58 am Posts: 5785 Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: reXos.
Currently Playing: Boi, ffxiv and dbz fighterz.
Waifu: am lonely
|
thats because that guy is a chick i think
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 5:39 am |
|
|
TacThree
Joined: Sat Oct 01, 2011 2:28 am Posts: 2796 Location: Los Angeles & San Luis Obispo, California Country:
Gender: Male
MGN Username: TAC3
Skype: Trey_Cahalan
Currently Playing: SSF2, League of Legends, Steam Games
|
The eyes look weird... as if you gave the eyeballs eyelids... yea
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 3:54 pm |
|
|
Masky
Joined: Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:03 pm Posts: 736 Location: 7th Street, Purgatory
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Resident Evil 6, SoulCalibur V, Slender: The Arrival, Minecraft
|
...I am pissed off right now.
1) The person on the bottom left is a chick. 2) They have those kind of KH-ish eyes. Realistic, yet anime. 3) It's called making bone structure.
_________________ What? That old guy? SmasherLink's no longer here, b****! The username is under new control! The name's Masky, and don't wear it out!
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 7:34 pm |
|
|
>Andy
Site Moderator
Joined: Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:54 pm Posts: 4227 Location: I wish I knew Country:
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Ninja Gaiden Black, Battle Chasers: Nightwar, Titanfall 2 MP
Waifu: Makoto Nijima
|
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 7:44 pm |
|
|
Masky
Joined: Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:03 pm Posts: 736 Location: 7th Street, Purgatory
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Resident Evil 6, SoulCalibur V, Slender: The Arrival, Minecraft
|
It's called eyeshine on the pupils, damnit!
_________________ What? That old guy? SmasherLink's no longer here, b****! The username is under new control! The name's Masky, and don't wear it out!
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 7:57 pm |
|
|
>Andy
Site Moderator
Joined: Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:54 pm Posts: 4227 Location: I wish I knew Country:
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Ninja Gaiden Black, Battle Chasers: Nightwar, Titanfall 2 MP
Waifu: Makoto Nijima
|
Nobody has any normal eyelids, either.
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 7:58 pm |
|
|
Masky
Joined: Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:03 pm Posts: 736 Location: 7th Street, Purgatory
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Resident Evil 6, SoulCalibur V, Slender: The Arrival, Minecraft
|
Yeah, refer to KH series for eyelids.
_________________ What? That old guy? SmasherLink's no longer here, b****! The username is under new control! The name's Masky, and don't wear it out!
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 8:00 pm |
|
|
>Andy
Site Moderator
Joined: Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:54 pm Posts: 4227 Location: I wish I knew Country:
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Ninja Gaiden Black, Battle Chasers: Nightwar, Titanfall 2 MP
Waifu: Makoto Nijima
|
People in Kingdom Hearts blink, don't they? I also know for sure that Donald, Mickey, and Goofy have eyelids.
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 8:02 pm |
|
|
Masky
Joined: Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:03 pm Posts: 736 Location: 7th Street, Purgatory
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Resident Evil 6, SoulCalibur V, Slender: The Arrival, Minecraft
|
You really need to look closer. They do have eyelids.
_________________ What? That old guy? SmasherLink's no longer here, b****! The username is under new control! The name's Masky, and don't wear it out!
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 8:03 pm |
|
|
>Andy
Site Moderator
Joined: Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:54 pm Posts: 4227 Location: I wish I knew Country:
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Ninja Gaiden Black, Battle Chasers: Nightwar, Titanfall 2 MP
Waifu: Makoto Nijima
|
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 8:04 pm |
|
|
Masky
Joined: Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:03 pm Posts: 736 Location: 7th Street, Purgatory
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Resident Evil 6, SoulCalibur V, Slender: The Arrival, Minecraft
|
See any lines ABOVE and UNDER the eyes? Thet's their eyelids.
_________________ What? That old guy? SmasherLink's no longer here, b****! The username is under new control! The name's Masky, and don't wear it out!
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 8:08 pm |
|
|
>Andy
Site Moderator
Joined: Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:54 pm Posts: 4227 Location: I wish I knew Country:
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Ninja Gaiden Black, Battle Chasers: Nightwar, Titanfall 2 MP
Waifu: Makoto Nijima
|
I thought they were deprived of sleep.
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 8:10 pm |
|
|
Psycho
Site Moderator
Joined: Fri May 22, 2009 3:44 pm Posts: 4156 Location: saying things with posed looks
Gender: Anime Girl
Skype: Snail's Legacy
Currently Playing: umib and unib
Waifu: SNAIL
|
lmfao
dude, if you can't take constructive criticism and turn it into a way to better your art, you probably shouldn't be an artist.
not terrible though. But... Eyelid's on anime characters shouldn't be done, unless they're wearing certain expressions. You characters kind of look like they're deprived of sleep though; the 'eyelids' underneath the eyes really do look like bags.
|
Fri Mar 15, 2013 8:28 pm |
|
|
Who is online |
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest |
|
You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot post attachments in this forum
|
|