Martial Haven; Comic by Cole + Sketch Showcase Regularly.
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cole
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.... I'll obviously do the original in English... or Spanish depending on when I release the first volume. Hehe.
I MIGHT release subtitles or something with MSPaint.... or what else should I do?
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Sat Aug 17, 2013 12:52 pm |
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Pochiman
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You should make it in english at the first, but why would you want it to be in spanish?
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Sat Aug 17, 2013 1:44 pm |
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cole
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BecauseIsaidsoandit'sMYmangaalsoknownasHaiirotoNijinoseifuku...
And it's because I'll FORCE you to teach me Spanish.
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Sat Aug 17, 2013 4:30 pm |
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rexos
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Currently Playing: Boi, ffxiv and dbz fighterz.
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its not a manga if its not japanese
im just saying
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Sat Aug 17, 2013 4:37 pm |
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cole
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Don't point that out, I know. That's not the point. im just saying . . . Back on topic... could someone give me some tips on how to draw the guy in front profile. Thank you. I wish it was Geno.... I drew him his femur fo fwee.
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Sat Aug 17, 2013 4:47 pm |
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Auraka
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There are dozens of great draw tutorials on the internet ツ
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Sat Aug 17, 2013 4:51 pm |
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Blue
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Oh my God, these look just like Geno's first pictures. I guess everyone on here starts with the shapely faces and odd proportions.
Although RamBilstein still has a way to go, as well...
No one will get that last reference.
_________________ "What if there is no tomorrow? There wasn't one today." ~Phil Conners, Channel 9 Pittsburgh Weather Man~
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Sat Aug 17, 2013 10:46 pm |
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cole
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Is that a good thing or a bad thing? I know that Ramsey is an avid artist now, but was he adequate in his first drawings? Yeah you're Blue and all so if you're saying something I know that it'll be helpful to an extent. I don't get it.
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Sun Aug 18, 2013 10:38 am |
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Steven
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Google+photographs as reference could do the trick. Although, if I may give you a bit of advice, if you have 'trouble' drawing faces en profile, I'd get in some more practise before attempting to draw a comic. Otherwise you may find yourself tangled within the process. The best course of atcion is to plot everything and everyone out beforehand and start working when you feel like you have sufficient skill. Also you might like this;  I believe this was made by Tumblruser 'captainsart'
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Sun Aug 18, 2013 4:28 pm |
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Pochiman
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boobs are so hard to draw properly sometimes even Eichiro Oda screw them
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Sun Aug 18, 2013 4:51 pm |
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Blue
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Ramsey started out as a small, meek little kid with little to nothing interesting about him. He's grown into a c*** kid with some interesting bits about him. You may be able to, as well. Granted, Geno has a million years to go before he's anywhere near where Kaze's about to reach, but he's trying. That's all we can ask, is that you continue to improve. The only way to do that is to keep on f*** up and fixing your mistakes until you know how to avoid them, in the future.
_________________ "What if there is no tomorrow? There wasn't one today." ~Phil Conners, Channel 9 Pittsburgh Weather Man~
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Sun Aug 18, 2013 4:55 pm |
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cole
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...at least you didn't bash on me. Um.. I had to ask. Why are you comparing me to Geno? He's better than me in most aspects. Honestly...(I couldn't make this up if I tried), that's just what I'm doing. For not too long I've been studying proportions through myself. I'm drawing and perfecting them until I'm satisfied. I'd post some but no one would care. As smart as I am( not boasting), I can't get better unless I fail.
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Sun Aug 18, 2013 5:10 pm |
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Blue
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Because your drawings look almost identical to his when he first started. Plus, what do you mean he's better than you? Dude, he's still an amateur. He holds no claim to fame, even he knows he's not that great. Don't look at him as a superior, look at him as a rival. Keep working on those wire frames and aspects in which you lack. You're going to get there, if you do.
_________________ "What if there is no tomorrow? There wasn't one today." ~Phil Conners, Channel 9 Pittsburgh Weather Man~
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Sun Aug 18, 2013 5:18 pm |
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cole
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Pardon the quality on both of these. Anatomy: man  Story character: Asuru along with basic anatomy. Two for one!  I guess I'll reveal more about the characters. Haiiro and Niji and Asuru: show Haiiro is the premature, smaller twin. He is one of three descendants of Helio Gracie, the creator of Gracie Brazilian Jiu Jitsu. He has scars from the assault his family received 14 years ago. One is under his right eye, the others are hidden under clothing. His mother was hospitalized when she tried to pry the knife out of the man's hand. She received cuts to her face, arms, stomach, neck and hands. His dad had been mauled earlier and was beginning to fight back, but instead called for help. Miraculously, his dad and Haiiro survived. The mother had months later, not because of the attack itself, but the cuts became infected and her immune system shut down over the series of months. As soon as Haiiro could stand, he was enrolled in MMA classes. He had never been aware of the assault but was aware of the scars. He found out through his own logic at a comprehendible age that he had no mother. This bulked his motivation beyond any client in years. He is now, 14, an eight time NAGA champion, Having won most of them. He specializes in submissions, bare knuckle brawling, and wrestling. His compassionate and willing attitude have helped him become the person he is today.
Niji is the younger, full-term twin. He is another descendant of Helio Gracie. Luckily, she was not born yet to have any interaction with the assault. She is one of the few feminine NAGA champions in history. Her natural hair color is a light shade of grey, but was died in respect for her mother. She specializes in sparring and jiu jitsu.
Asuru is the youngest sibling. He is 11. He is the third descendant of Helio Gracie. He follows in Haiiro's footsteps and strives toward Haiiro's level. He has natural blue hair.(Okay, let me explain. My family has brown hair. Which is related to black. Which is related to grey. My brother has red hair. Which is related to brown, black and grey. Blue is related to grey. Get it?) He is an extremely intelligent individual. He has an IQ of 125. Haiiro has an IQ of 141(I have an IQ of 141). He specializes in jiu jitsu and wrestling. He is the last of the Gracie generation for now.
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Sun Aug 18, 2013 8:59 pm |
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Blue
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Yeah, definitely skip the backstories. If you want to improve your art, focus on it. Not many people can be good at both writing and drawing. Words take a long time to master, as does visual media. However, I recommend skipping the English language major. I can't get much better and look what its brought me. I wish I had picked up a paintbrush rather than a pen. Sure, people can understand me better and I can write stories, but people hate reading. I'm an RP-fag, but not a draw-fag.
_________________ "What if there is no tomorrow? There wasn't one today." ~Phil Conners, Channel 9 Pittsburgh Weather Man~
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Sun Aug 18, 2013 9:43 pm |
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