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			| Geno Site Admin 
					Joined: Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:32 amPosts:  11709Country:  Gender:  Anime Girl
					
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				   |   Hm, I feel link this was the wrong drawing to test this on... but I'll show anyway.  I didn't finish.   ->   Hmm.  Strange.  Crazy how coloring can completely change the mood of a piece. I'll keep trying it out.  It didn't work out this time, but I feel like it would work really well on a lighthearted drawing.  We'll see how it goes.
 
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			| Sat Nov 19, 2011 8:11 pm | 
					
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			| CardCaptor Sakura 
					Joined: Sun Sep 28, 2008 1:38 am
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   |   There's something off about his faceIt's not positioned correctly and so does not look anatomically correct
 
 @Techno Green: I clearly meant "f*****" Green who types all this s*** that can be summarised in 1 or 2 sentences
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			| Sat Nov 19, 2011 8:39 pm | 
					
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			| Geno Site Admin 
					Joined: Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:32 amPosts:  11709Country:  Gender:  Anime Girl
					
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				   |   Yeah, I was going for downward angle.  Guess I messed it up.  I'll work on it.  Thanks.
 
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			| Sat Nov 19, 2011 8:47 pm | 
					
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			| Blue Site Moderator 
					Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:31 pm
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   |   I can see you've tried out a few of the techniques shown in the tutorial. I do like the new shirt, but it's still unclear where the light is coming from. Looks like it's from above now with some minor discrepancies. _________________ "What if there is no tomorrow? There wasn't one today." ~Phil Conners, Channel 9 Pittsburgh Weather Man~ 
 
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			| Green Mage Site Moderator 
					Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 2:53 pmPosts:  2110Country:     |   it kinda looks like he more has a big forehead maybe move his features a bit higher or something 
 
 
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			| Whimzer 
					Joined: Sun Jun 13, 2010 4:58 pmPosts:  2788Location:  KalifornioCountry:  Gender:  Anime Girl
					
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				   |   the face is really awkward 
 
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			| Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:28 pm | 
					
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			| Iron Joe 
					Joined: Wed Sep 14, 2011 3:38 pm
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 Location: Some video game location that I'm obviously not actually in but think it'd be funny to say I am
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			| Green Mage Site Moderator 
					Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 2:53 pmPosts:  2110Country:     |   no it is a bit awkward with the angle 
 
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			| Mongoloid 
					Joined: Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:39 pm
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   |   you suck man _________________
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			| Equi 
					Joined: Sun Nov 13, 2011 12:05 amPosts:  1470Location:  MassachusettsCountry:  Gender:  Male
					
						MGN Username:  Equinox
					
						Skype:  HolyEquinox
					
						Currently Playing:  Sonic & All-Stars Racing Transformed.
					
				   |   Eventually he'll do better, with more practice.
 
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			| Pope Krillin VI 
					Joined: Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:31 amPosts:  1342Location:  Queensland, Australia.Country:  Gender:  Male
					
				   |   Here's 'SSF2 @ SSBB Master' to give you advice...
 
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			| Equi 
					Joined: Sun Nov 13, 2011 12:05 amPosts:  1470Location:  MassachusettsCountry:  Gender:  Male
					
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				   |   Have you got ANY better ideas?
 
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			| Nick 
					Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am
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   |   Shutting up unless you have something useful to say? I have to disagree with Blue on this one, I think the shirt looks terrible in the second version, it looks lighter then the darkest part of the face and it should also be darker on the right shoulder(from the characters perspective). Of course this is all under the assumption that the lightsource is in the top right corner. Another thing that ruins the picture is that you tried to use the tinted shading but didn't stay consistent with the tutorials style, the reason it looks like s*** is because you tried to combine solid shadowing with the tutorial. This picture is an amazing example to use this tutorial, unfortunetaly you need to take another look because its clear you're missing something. Lastly the white shirt completely lost its shading, what the f*** is up with that? protip - use darker and gloomier tints in this drawing, you don't have to use pinks and purples for this tutorial to look nice. edit: 're_________________ 
 
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			| Blitzamirin 
					Joined: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:51 amPosts:  2014Location:  ParadiseCountry:  Gender:  Male
					
				   |   The face looks all mashed up. 
 
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			| Blue Site Moderator 
					Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:31 pm
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   |   You spelled unfortunately wrong._________________ "What if there is no tomorrow? There wasn't one today." ~Phil Conners, Channel 9 Pittsburgh Weather Man~ 
 
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