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Geno
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Joined: Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:32 am Posts: 11709 Country:
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Hm, I feel link this was the wrong drawing to test this on... but I'll show anyway. I didn't finish. -> Hmm. Strange. Crazy how coloring can completely change the mood of a piece. I'll keep trying it out. It didn't work out this time, but I feel like it would work really well on a lighthearted drawing. We'll see how it goes.
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Sat Nov 19, 2011 8:11 pm |
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CardCaptor Sakura
Joined: Sun Sep 28, 2008 1:38 am Posts: 2286 Location: The Wonderful Land of Aus
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There's something off about his face It's not positioned correctly and so does not look anatomically correct
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Sat Nov 19, 2011 8:39 pm |
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Geno
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Yeah, I was going for downward angle. Guess I messed it up. I'll work on it. Thanks.
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Sat Nov 19, 2011 8:47 pm |
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Blue
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:31 pm Posts: 14078 Location: Fuck.
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I can see you've tried out a few of the techniques shown in the tutorial. I do like the new shirt, but it's still unclear where the light is coming from. Looks like it's from above now with some minor discrepancies.
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Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:32 am |
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Green Mage
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it kinda looks like he more has a big forehead maybe move his features a bit higher or something
Last edited by Green Mage on Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:32 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:54 am |
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Whimzer
Joined: Sun Jun 13, 2010 4:58 pm Posts: 2788 Location: Kalifornio Country:
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Currently Playing: Mandolin
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the face is really awkward
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Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:28 pm |
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Iron Joe
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Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:42 pm |
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Green Mage
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 2:53 pm Posts: 2110 Country:
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no it is a bit awkward with the angle
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Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:49 pm |
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Mongoloid
Joined: Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:39 pm Posts: 154 Location: California
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you suck man
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Mon Nov 21, 2011 5:45 am |
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Equi
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Eventually he'll do better, with more practice.
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Mon Nov 21, 2011 5:55 am |
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Pope Krillin VI
Joined: Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:31 am Posts: 1342 Location: Queensland, Australia. Country:
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Here's 'SSF2 @ SSBB Master' to give you advice...
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Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:01 am |
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Equi
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Have you got ANY better ideas?
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Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:04 am |
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Nick
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229
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Shutting up unless you have something useful to say? I have to disagree with Blue on this one, I think the shirt looks terrible in the second version, it looks lighter then the darkest part of the face and it should also be darker on the right shoulder(from the characters perspective). Of course this is all under the assumption that the lightsource is in the top right corner. Another thing that ruins the picture is that you tried to use the tinted shading but didn't stay consistent with the tutorials style, the reason it looks like s*** is because you tried to combine solid shadowing with the tutorial. This picture is an amazing example to use this tutorial, unfortunetaly you need to take another look because its clear you're missing something. Lastly the white shirt completely lost its shading, what the f*** is up with that? protip - use darker and gloomier tints in this drawing, you don't have to use pinks and purples for this tutorial to look nice. edit: 're
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Mon Nov 21, 2011 10:50 am |
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Blitzamirin
Joined: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:51 am Posts: 2014 Location: Paradise Country:
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The face looks all mashed up.
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Mon Nov 21, 2011 2:03 pm |
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Blue
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You spelled unfortunately wrong.
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