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First off, I'd like to say that any good critique is nice to see, and I will be updating to add more. The files will be large, so you'll wanna wait if ya got a slow computer. I upload to my dA a lot, so...yeah...

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i'm not really an expert on these things but the guy at the left-bottom corner has a weird body shape

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The eyes look weird... as if you gave the eyeballs eyelids...
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...I am pissed off right now.

1) The person on the bottom left is a chick.
2) They have those kind of KH-ish eyes. Realistic, yet anime.
3) It's called making bone structure.

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SmasherLink wrote:
...I am pissed off right now.
Why? It's called constructive criticism
1) The person on the bottom left is a chick.
Chest design looks like it's coming out of the side, so it's still a bit odd.
2) They have those kind of KH-ish eyes. Realistic, yet anime.
No... you've got eyes, and then you have EYELIDS IN THE PUPILS. Not realistic or anime!
3) It's called making bone structure.
No idea what this was a reply to, unless it's related to 1.

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It's called eyeshine on the pupils, damnit!

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SmasherLink wrote:
It's called eyeshine on the pupils, damnit!

Nobody has any normal eyelids, either.

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King Arthur wrote:
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It's called eyeshine on the pupils, damnit!

Nobody has any normal eyelids, either.


Yeah, refer to KH series for eyelids.

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SmasherLink wrote:
King Arthur wrote:
SmasherLink wrote:
It's called eyeshine on the pupils, damnit!

Nobody has any normal eyelids, either.


Yeah, refer to KH series for eyelids.

People in Kingdom Hearts blink, don't they?

I also know for sure that Donald, Mickey, and Goofy have eyelids.

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King Arthur wrote:
SmasherLink wrote:
King Arthur wrote:
SmasherLink wrote:
It's called eyeshine on the pupils, damnit!

Nobody has any normal eyelids, either.


Yeah, refer to KH series for eyelids.

People in Kingdom Hearts blink, don't they?

I also know for sure that Donald, Mickey, and Goofy have eyelids.


You really need to look closer. They do have eyelids.

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SmasherLink wrote:
King Arthur wrote:
SmasherLink wrote:
King Arthur wrote:
SmasherLink wrote:
It's called eyeshine on the pupils, damnit!

Nobody has any normal eyelids, either.


Yeah, refer to KH series for eyelids.

People in Kingdom Hearts blink, don't they?

I also know for sure that Donald, Mickey, and Goofy have eyelids.


You really need to look closer. They do have eyelids.

Nope, just pupilids.

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King Arthur wrote:
SmasherLink wrote:
King Arthur wrote:
SmasherLink wrote:
King Arthur wrote:
SmasherLink wrote:
It's called eyeshine on the pupils, damnit!

Nobody has any normal eyelids, either.


Yeah, refer to KH series for eyelids.

People in Kingdom Hearts blink, don't they?

I also know for sure that Donald, Mickey, and Goofy have eyelids.


You really need to look closer. They do have eyelids.

Nope, just pupilids.


See any lines ABOVE and UNDER the eyes? Thet's their eyelids.

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Fri Mar 15, 2013 8:08 pm
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SmasherLink wrote:
King Arthur wrote:
SmasherLink wrote:
King Arthur wrote:
SmasherLink wrote:
King Arthur wrote:
SmasherLink wrote:
It's called eyeshine on the pupils, damnit!

Nobody has any normal eyelids, either.


Yeah, refer to KH series for eyelids.

People in Kingdom Hearts blink, don't they?

I also know for sure that Donald, Mickey, and Goofy have eyelids.


You really need to look closer. They do have eyelids.

Nope, just pupilids.


See any lines ABOVE and UNDER the eyes? Thet's their eyelids.

I thought they were deprived of sleep.

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lmfao

dude, if you can't take constructive criticism and turn it into a way to better your art, you probably shouldn't be an artist.

not terrible though. But...
Eyelid's on anime characters shouldn't be done, unless they're wearing certain expressions.
You characters kind of look like they're deprived of sleep though; the 'eyelids' underneath the eyes really do look like bags.

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