The Legend of Korah *CH4 RELEASE*
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Shing
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Korah That was sweet may you put the words '' Special thanks to Kyubisora'' at the end credits i know you dont know me at all i was just wondering because you are a very good spriter
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Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:34 pm |
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Chozo
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:19 am Posts: 3590 Location: Boston, MA
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One person called it a SMBZ clone.
They also say dbz fighting isn't made for swords and I agree to an extent but trunks owned frieza with a sword didn't he?
However maybe if the sword fights were more like ruroni kenshin or peacemaker it'd be better.
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Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:41 pm |
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Korah Hyoutetsu [NF]
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:55 am Posts: 2249 Location: Orlando, FL
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Seeing that the only anime I ever liked was DBZ and Avatar, I can't really say. Anyways, here's the YouTube Version of Episode One: http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=zhfU_ARQqMc
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Wed Aug 13, 2008 5:28 pm |
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Feng
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Wed Aug 13, 2008 5:46 pm |
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Straitjacket[Luna]
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:47 pm Posts: 328 Location: In the beginning and in the end...
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WTF would he say 'Special thanks to Kyubisora' when you haven't done s***? Sorry if I sound like an a** but I hate noobs like you.
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Wed Aug 13, 2008 9:06 pm |
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Snow Taradien
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You now have earned +50 win points.
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Wed Aug 13, 2008 9:52 pm |
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Straitjacket[Luna]
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_________________That's right b****, Luna's adopted by Belth. That's right b****, Luna's married to Bomber. --------------------------------------------
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Wed Aug 13, 2008 10:24 pm |
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Chozo
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Might br hard to illustrate since you can only go left to right. But I think Korah needs more slashes that little stab/jab thing really doesn't cut it. It looks more like a pook than anything harmful. Anyone ruroni kenshin http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oYHcPmV45Kshttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b6FWFNIEPgIhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EyExz-KN184http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_mXE42QgOAIhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=npBKggbgifoPeacemaker http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1lD6W7B9QhsThats more realistic sword fighting. For less realistic sword fighting I think I may know an anime. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1W7UE77t ... re=relatedStill decently realistic but meh. I don't think I'll find sword beams.
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Wed Aug 13, 2008 11:05 pm |
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Ichigo
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What you need to do is if you're going to continue this series you're going to need a stylistic sword fighting system.
Try reworking the style and look through websites that have decent videos on sword fighting in a more realistic sense, then try and mix it in with your "DBZ" view. But please, no more sword beams and massive amounts of teleporting.
Also, I guess since Panda is writing the script, you made Snow WAY to one dimensional. He's a master of his sword, he lost witch I suppose can be understood, =\.. But then he just joins Korah? What? Snow seems like he was FORCED into the story, rather then worked in naturally. I don't mean to sound insulting but your story is pretty rough so far.
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Thu Aug 14, 2008 12:43 am |
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BlazeTheHedgehog
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:17 am Posts: 313 Location: hell along side bluemage77.
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make a game!
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Thu Aug 14, 2008 12:54 am |
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mario890
Joined: Wed Aug 13, 2008 9:17 am Posts: 23
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nice
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Thu Aug 14, 2008 9:01 am |
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Snow Taradien
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Actually, that's why it was kinda odd to me, after changing the script. After Nin changed the dialogue, Snow seems to join because he HAS to, but in the original, he joins of his on volition.
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Thu Aug 14, 2008 9:31 am |
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Chozo
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Do the videos I posted above your post realisitc enough for yah?
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Thu Aug 14, 2008 9:33 am |
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Ichigo
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I watch alot of Kenshin, and Yes I like the fights that come up in Kenshin, So yes.
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Thu Aug 14, 2008 1:40 pm |
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Korah Hyoutetsu [NF]
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:55 am Posts: 2249 Location: Orlando, FL
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I saw the first link. It has so much talking, it's kinda boring. And I doubt I can some stuff like that, seeing that it has different angles that can't really be done with sprites. Although I'm assuming you want the characters to do some flips and stuff, amrite? I'll be watching the rest soon. Well, I can't really do much about the story, but in episode two, I'm going to be explaining how Snow went easy on Korah, because Snow knew that Korah was the one who was going to defeat the king, and that he needed help.
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Thu Aug 14, 2008 1:47 pm |
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