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Sans From Undertale (Begginers Work) 
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My very first attempt at making a pixel art. Post your feedback.

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Wed Jan 20, 2016 4:35 am
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Zugskeletorc wrote:
My very first attempt at making a pixel art. Post your feedback.

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Hey there, welcome to the boards.

I like the idle of the first gif, pretty ok for a start. Although you may have noticed it already, the second gif shifts a pixel up during the animation, should fix that. But it looks fine atm, good luck continuing it.

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Wed Jan 20, 2016 4:46 am
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if this really is your first attempt at drawing pixel art, those are quite good!! it takes a long time for most people to get to that kind of level from scratch, good job!!

The first animation looks pretty good! Keeping it true to the original idle animation I see.
A suggestion to make it better would be to shift the lines on the pants to where the edge of sans's jacket lines are moving, so it doesn't look like there are just legs there standing idle while the rest of his body is moving to the side. Also, I spot some weird white pixels appearing in some frames on sans's right jacket collar, and a few black ones underneath sans's left arm in some frames.

I look forward to seeing more!

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Zugskeletorc wrote:
My very first attempt at making a pixel art. Post your feedback.

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Wow, that looks really good! I need to try some simplistic styles to get better at my spriting....

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