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Pope Krillin VI
Joined: Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:31 am Posts: 1342 Location: Queensland, Australia. Country:
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Anyway, I've been working on one of my favourite fighting game characters, Kyo from King Of Fighters, in JUS format. I'm not posting it here to show it to people, I'm posting it here for constructive critism. So help me out. At the moment all I have is a standing sprite. I may make a sheet soon. Also depending on how things pan out this may be in a game.
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Sun Jul 31, 2011 2:46 am |
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Sazh
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i know which game!!!
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Sun Jul 31, 2011 8:02 pm |
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Pope Krillin VI
Joined: Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:31 am Posts: 1342 Location: Queensland, Australia. Country:
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Haha IKR! Anyways I thought I might be able to improve it, thats why I posted it here.
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Sun Jul 31, 2011 9:58 pm |
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Sazh
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Lol, well it looks pretty good. When will you start working on the sheet?
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Sun Jul 31, 2011 10:12 pm |
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Pope Krillin VI
Joined: Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:31 am Posts: 1342 Location: Queensland, Australia. Country:
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Better not delay it too much longer :/
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Sun Jul 31, 2011 10:16 pm |
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Sazh
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Well then i look forward to seeing more.
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StriderH58
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It doesn't look like Kyo.
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Mon Aug 01, 2011 5:18 pm |
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Pope Krillin VI
Joined: Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:31 am Posts: 1342 Location: Queensland, Australia. Country:
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Well considering I'm trying to make Kyo in JUS format I'd say giving me the critical piece of "It doesn't look like Kyo." As your whole post wasn't really that helpful as I was probably going to try to do that anyway. Can you maybe be more specific. I was thinking about changing the face. Can you maybe give me some pointers? Someone before has said that his nose was too long and his chin was too, probably due to the fact that I hardly edited the face from Kenshiro (Fist Of The North Star). Could you perhaps confirm this? Any of these would actually be helpful, and I genuinely would appreciate it. Also, the Kyo sheet I was basing it off (for reference): http://www.spriters-resource.com/arcade ... sheet/8189
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Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:00 pm |
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reborn574
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changing the face wont be bad you can really see kenshiro there.the shading doesnt seem so bad either try adding a bit more contrast.thats all i have (im not very good at giving cc).
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Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:13 pm |
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Pope Krillin VI
Joined: Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:31 am Posts: 1342 Location: Queensland, Australia. Country:
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Thanks for the advice. I've been trying to work on the jacket and stuff, couldn't quite put my finger on what was wrong. I'll try that.
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Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:17 pm |
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reborn574
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adding more texture wouldn't hurt either you can try that.
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Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:31 pm |
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Michael
Joined: Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:47 am Posts: 2081 Location: At home, working and playing
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Train's Head would look better for Kyo
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Wed Aug 03, 2011 9:03 am |
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Geno
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He should make his own head. Or heavily edit one so it looks nothing like anything else.
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Wed Aug 03, 2011 9:11 am |
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