Alright, people, expect the first post before the day is out, but I'm keeping bio submissions open indefinitely.

Alright, last minute changes since I'm insecure as all heck about DM'ing fights.

I'm going to remove the stats from gummi ships, gummi ship fighting will also become completely freeform.

It just feels like it'd be a hassle to toss three dice around every time someone fires a shot. There will still be some stats. Carrying capacity (number of people), armament (type and amount of weapons) and speed, namely. (higher speed ships can flee from lower speed ships, obviously)

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indefinitely means from now to forever or so

these last couple of days have been hectic and exhausting, post coming tomorrow. if i don't, annoy me via pm or MSN.

Ok I know I'm going to get flamed for this (by hakker of course.), but just look at my edited bio post back on page 6. I've fixed everything, but the bad grammar. This seems like a cool rp and I would like to be apart of it. Okay I'm prepared for your insults.

I can't believe I even bothered to seriously read it.

Name: Hina Price
Gender : Female
Age : 17
Faction : The Castle Knights
Personality : Polite, shy, calming
Appearance : Purpleish black hair with purple camo and a golden bracelet
Bio : As a child I was I had a very happy loving family but one day the they were all killed so I was sent to an orphanage we I got very little sleep and very early mornings but I got adopted by a very tall muscle man and a very young looking women and every night they would whip and rape me so one day I got very frustrated and ran away whic result in me learning to live and survive for myself but I then came across the men who murdered my famliy and which I had to make a decision run or fight I then ran into the crowed blindly and from that day I realized I love avenging and fighting so I ran off to the war.
Weapon of choice : Switch blade, shotgun and a long katana.

Maybe you should read the other profiles before you spew out some of that crap.

What's wrong with it?

First person.

should I delete the post?

Just look at the accepted ones and model yours after those.

Name:Hina Price
Gender:Female
Age:17
Faction: The Castle
Personality:Polite, shy, and calming
Apperance: Purpleish black hair with a Camo and purple combat boots
Bio: As a child hina was very repective and kind to her parents they were very loving and happy but one night some strange men ramage their way through Hina's house her dad grab her and hid her in a closet this but this didn't stop hina from peaking through a crack in the door, After the men tied up her family and shot them they took their masked off and laughed Hina stayed hidden and cried. Hina was found by the police force and they took her to an awful Millitary orphanage were she got little sleep because of her nightmares about that awful night. Hina had to wake up early because she had to run millitary drills but later she was adopted by a tall musclar man and a very young looking women later when they went home Hina was Whiped and raped by the new family so one night Hina ran away which resulted in her learning to Live and survive for herself as she went to go get Breakfast she heard some familar laughing and ran into that direction she then saw
that those were the man who killed her family Hina then had to make a decision run or stay and fight so she charged in blindly and ten minutes later she saw all the men dead at her feet from that day on she knew that she got a fix from avenging a fighting so she decided to join the war.

Is this better?

No description of the face, only clothing? Not touching the bio.

Also why does this thread say WIP?