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I'm terrible at spriting let me show you
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I'm terrible at spriting let me show you
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 Joined: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:35 pm Posts: 69 Gender: Male 
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Ok so I'm gonna bump this with slightly better stuff
 Let's start with a sprite of Ralph from that one movie Some feedback on how to improve it would be nice _________________  Last edited by StayPuft on Tue Nov 27, 2012 8:58 pm, edited 1 time in total. |
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| Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:47 pm |
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 Joined: Sat Aug 28, 2010 8:36 am Posts: 1048 Location: Made in China Country: 
Gender: Male Skype: mr.shoop Currently Playing: Force of Will, League of Legends, Yu-Gi-Oh!
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They look great, but there just missing something. I don't know what.
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| Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:08 pm |
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Site Admin  Joined: Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:32 am Posts: 11709 Country:
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ASHLEY!!!
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| Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:09 pm |
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Joined: Sat Aug 28, 2010 8:36 am Posts: 1048 Location: Made in China Country:
Gender: Male Skype: mr.shoop Currently Playing: Force of Will, League of Legends, Yu-Gi-Oh!
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No, it's not ASHLEY!!!, I'm just not sure what.
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| Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:10 pm |
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Joined: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:35 pm Posts: 69 Gender: Male
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I think he was pointing out that I sprited Ashley. I may be wrong, though. _________________ |
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| Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:34 pm |
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Site Admin Joined: Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:32 am Posts: 11709 Country:
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you're right
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| Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:40 pm |
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Joined: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:35 pm Posts: 69 Gender: Male
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Okay.
Anyone have any constructive criticism/tips on how I could improve? _________________ |
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| Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:49 pm |
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 Joined: Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:10 am Posts: 2601 Location: Australia - Sydney Gender: Male Currently Playing: Ninja Gaiden III
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Keep track of the centre of gravity. Looking at Phoenix Wright in particular, he should be on the ground if he tried to stay standing like that. Phoenix also needs more consistent lighting
Looking at Caroline, there probably needs to be more contrast, she looks far too dull. _________________  |
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| Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:59 pm |
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Joined: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:35 pm Posts: 69 Gender: Male
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I can understand the lighting with Phoenix and colors with Coraline (I was going to fix them anyway); though I'm not quite sure what you're getting at with gravity. Do you mean the feet should be aligned, or something?
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| Fri Nov 12, 2010 6:47 am |
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Joined: Sat Aug 28, 2010 8:36 am Posts: 1048 Location: Made in China Country:
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I was joking. So I think I know what I meant! Their missing: Shazam. _________________ |
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| Fri Nov 12, 2010 3:43 pm |
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Joined: Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:10 am Posts: 2601 Location: Australia - Sydney Gender: Male Currently Playing: Ninja Gaiden III
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He looks like he's about to fall _________________ |
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| Fri Nov 12, 2010 8:20 pm |
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Joined: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:35 pm Posts: 69 Gender: Male
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Hmm... I kinda see were you're getting with that.
I'll try to fix that up. _________________ |
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| Fri Nov 12, 2010 11:15 pm |
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PW's leg seems a little bit akward
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| Wed Nov 17, 2010 2:09 am |
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Hey Staypuft could i use you Phinox wright sprite please!
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| Wed Nov 17, 2010 6:58 pm |
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Joined: Sat Aug 28, 2010 8:36 am Posts: 1048 Location: Made in China Country:
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I think that your Phoenix Wright could have a better right (our left) arm. It looks too round. And yeah, fix his leg. _________________ |
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| Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:08 pm |
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