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The Legend of Korah *CH4 RELEASE*
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 Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:55 am Posts: 2249 Location: Orlando, FL 
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Here's the Legend of Korah for you!
Current Episode: IV Prologue: Newgrounds http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/398364 YouTube http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=OPQ0m08LmJI (They're both the same thing) Chapter One: Newgrounds http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/453564 YouTube http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=zhfU_ARQqMc Chapter Two: Newgrounds http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/479424 YouTube http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=edsAYo6MVwA Chapter Three: Newgrounds http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/490576 YouTube http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rVKdX1fcSo4 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IrxkipQI2d8 Chapter Four: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/517163 The Legend of Korah Sites Site http://blizzardblade.sirtopeia.com/index.html Forums http://blizzardblade.forummotion.com/ |
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| Mon Aug 11, 2008 4:21 pm |
 
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 Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:28 am Posts: 840 Location: Hialeah, Florida Gender: Male
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i think its awesome and im working on my sprite now so hopefully it can be in
 _________________ "The wise man embraces silence, while the fool can be heard for miles." 
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| Mon Aug 11, 2008 4:22 pm |
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 Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:17 am Posts: 527 Location: Under your bed, and in your Closet Country: 
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Updated again?!
MUST WATCH! _________________  I hunt you down... Say no more... And silently you die... |
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| Mon Aug 11, 2008 4:30 pm |
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 Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 3:42 pm Posts: 51
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well its alot better, but at the part with the beams, if you watch it in widescreen(like i have to) you can see that its just the first part of the beams and that they dont conrinue anywhere. also he walks in from random blackness in the beggining.
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| Mon Aug 11, 2008 4:53 pm |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:17 am Posts: 527 Location: Under your bed, and in your Closet Country:
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I wasn't gonna say it... But Daichi is right. _________________ I hunt you down... Say no more... And silently you die... |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:55 am Posts: 2249 Location: Orlando, FL
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:55 am Posts: 2249 Location: Orlando, FL
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I moved this to the General Flash section since this will be a series, and some of the flash is already completed.
Anyways, I'll be updating again soon, and will most likely be my last update on Episode One, then, I will release the final version on Newgrounds tomorrow or Wednesday. Afterwards will be episode two! |
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| Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:09 pm |
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 Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 4:43 pm Posts: 57
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Well, my character is coming along great, but I still need a name...
Uh... Hmm... Yeah, I need help with this XD _________________   I adopted KerimEelots. |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:55 am Posts: 2249 Location: Orlando, FL
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Well guys, this will probably be final update for episode one before it is uploaded onto Newgrounds. Any other suggestions would be great!
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| Tue Aug 12, 2008 10:46 am |
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 Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:33 am Posts: 846
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Put it on Youtube too, if you can.
I can't wait for this to finally come out, so I don't have to download to watch!  |
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 Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:47 pm Posts: 328 Location: In the beginning and in the end...
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YAY!
_________________ That's right b****, Luna's adopted by Belth. That's right b****, Luna's married to Bomber. --------------------------------------------
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:17 am Posts: 527 Location: Under your bed, and in your Closet Country:
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The constant Repeat loop at the scene directly after the beam, when Snow gets hit from below... Get's really annoying. As for the sword beam, although cool and all, am I the only one who found it somewhat out of place?
_________________ I hunt you down... Say no more... And silently you die... |
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Site Moderator  Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 6:37 am Posts: 1433 Location: .j Country: 
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Problems that need to be fixed.
Dialogue- The dialouge was bland and was so uninteresting I just felt bored reading it. Fighting- Sword beam? DBZ teleportation? It just doesn't fit. Plot line- Nothing happens, at all that keeps my attention aside from a part of the fight scene.There's no build to the action. How did he get in the town? What town is he in? Why does he think the sword is there? Sprite- You need to give Korah a sheathed sword walk, and you need to make your own beam attacks. Seriously though among all these things, you need to work on your writing and plot creation. _________________ |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:55 am Posts: 2249 Location: Orlando, FL
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Fighting-It's supposed to be DBZ styled Plot line- He finally found the other half of his sword, now he can out and fine the other swords and kill his king. It doesn't matter what town he's in, because its not an important town. He doesn't think the sword is there. He just went there for a pit-stop (Obviously stated). Sprite-Eh, I guess. |
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