Welcome to my art thread! For the sake of archiving, I left my old (and embarrasing stuff) available but here's the new stuff first









Old trash below
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Where are the sprites?

I'm guessing he's going to upload the sprites later on, and just created this topic so that it existed.

Still, if I were to create a spriting topic, I would make sure to have at least one sprite completed, preferably a full sheet.

Update!
Some characters arts

Your art looks better than what I've ever done.

Seriously.

You need t work on your lineart.

Oh, Thanks!

It not help me much

Most of the people's heads are flat. Change that. Also the ones in your signature were saved in the wrong format it looks like. The ones in your sig look better than the ones you posted. Post all of them and we can give you more critique.

Metaknight's mask is too big. Recommend you use a reference picture for the mask if you can
Other than that, it looks good.

My mind is blown.

When making pixel art, don't use the line tool.

And remember kids- draw first, pixel art-ify later.

Update! more characters

Good work on ignoring all the critique.

Protip: Draw the characters with the pencil tool before hand, then go over and refine your lines.

Don't draw the original characters right off the bat with clean lines. You're bound spend countless hours staring at your work thinking to yourself "What the f*** wrong with the proportions??"

Other than the fact that you upload them even when they're not even close to complete.

-The left hand is square shaped. Its supposed to have a round edge
-The beak (or whatever you called it) does not look like the real one. Needs more of a round feeling and largen up the nose
-The body positions are incorrect
-If you look closely, Some of his clothing has a fur-type appeal. Your dedede looks like cut-out paper. I know its a sticker but cmon.. At least add detail to it
-Your mallet doesn't match the brawl version of king dedede's mallet in any way

If you want better design, i'd highly recommending drawing this out first.. Its optional but its gonna be a hard step fixing these drawings. They're ok at first but they're totally messed up in both proportions and positions in some-many ways and thats really a huge factor in drawing these type of characters.

They're not bad but they're not good either.
Don't keep drawing more characters just now.
Take all the critique in this topic and try to consider these. You'll get better and better once you do

Sorry to say this but if you ignore this type of critique, your cut-out paper drawings are gonna keep looking like crap.. Its like saying "From now on dude, you should just trace over it".. Sorry but honest critique

Critique is another important factor in drawing. Consider it wisely