Well...I just though the Wyverns head body was too stiff...along with the idle.

But If you do need soemthing soon...I guess I can see what I can do.

Is a week reasonable?

Hopefully, like I said, I have a busy week with school, a play, and playing Okami.

Update! Woohoo!

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblad ... Ep%204.swf

Pretty good action.... you don't see a lot of the leader...

The snowflake still needs to fix so it is a smoother transition between repeats

...does that really matter, its a preloader.

IMO yes

If there is going to be any preloader, it had better work.

Frankly, a stationary Snowflake would be better than a choppy animation

That's right, I've adding voice acting! We haven't done any direct dialogue yet, but instead we've just done some simple voices in the background. I suggest you watch the whole chapter again to see what I'm getting at.

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblad ... Ep%204.swf

Just keep the subtitles please

Huge update. Haven't posted here in awhile. Lots of stuff added that I don't have time to explain, so see the whole chapter again to catch anything. It's almost complete, just a few things to add here and there for the fight scene.

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblad ... Ep%204.swf

Well, I know it's just under work right now, but EPS 4 disappoints me.

VOICE-ACTING:-
Okay, it might sound cool in words, but, really. Voice-acting also means that you've got to be in character. Here, it sounds like you're voice-acting against your will. It fairly monotone, and gets boring after a while.

PLOT:-
Kay, you can do anything you want here, I ain't stopping you, but, as far as I'm concerned (maybe my memory is faulty) the Angelis become corrupted if they are in excessive emotion. Whilst for Snow, when Rachel died, normally, wouldn't he have become corrupted?

FLASH:-
At some parts, it's maybe because my computer is slow, the animation is very laggy, the back ground is cut off, and the artwork put just doesn't seem to fit in the animation. The only artwork-style that was good for the animation in there, to my eyes, was the one of Korah lookin' around for the bandits.

Well, not gonna make a big review,
but generally, I rate the series
3.6/5

Could the snowflake replacement be slowed down?

Also during the transition from the loading sign to the quality control, you can keep clicking the play button (admittedly it doesn't do anything, but the 'click' animation still runs.

Regarding the scroll which reads 'the legend of Korah' at the beginning, the text shouldn't get wider and thinner when the scroll opens and closes, it should just gradually get cropped and whatever the opposite of cropping is

Fourthly, the drawing at the beginning is rather inconsistent, in some places there are outlines and in others there isn't, especially the white tuft of hair at the front

I can fix some of those things.