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Post Re: Damian works Elegy of Dekuness
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Currently drawing Byakitten's request.

In the meantime, can someone critique this?
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That looks really good. It's almost perfect actually. The ONLY thing I see off about it is the left-most hairpiece... It seems... kinda weird... I don't know how to really explain it.

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Post Re: Damian works Elegy of Dekuness
Velosareon wrote:
Damian wrote:
Currently drawing Byakitten's request.

In the meantime, can someone critique this?
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That looks really good. It's almost perfect actually. The ONLY thing I see off about it is the left-most hairpiece... It seems... kinda weird... I don't know how to really explain it.


I think I see what you mean. I should be able to fix it.

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Post Re: Damian works Elegy of Dekuness
Damian wrote:
Currently drawing Byakitten's request.

In the meantime, can someone critique this?
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The contrast in the wooden-coloured parts needs an incease.

One of the shades on the hat (the one between the brightest and darkest) is worthless.

If the the entire body and outfit is outlined in solid black, then the hair should be too.

Deku Link has the top of his arm wider than the wrist, whereas yours are just one pixel lines.

Especially because the flower holding arm is extremely thin.
And it could use some shading, seeing as it can have more than one solid colour.
Sun Sep 12, 2010 2:11 pm
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Post Re: Damian works Elegy of Dekuness
Proton wrote:
Damian wrote:
Currently drawing Byakitten's request.

In the meantime, can someone critique this?
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The contrast in the wooden-coloured parts needs an incease.Agreed. So does hair.

One of the shades on the hat (the one between the brightest and darkest) is worthless.I didn't even notice there was one. So, yeah...

If the the entire body and outfit is outlined in solid black, then the hair should be too.Perhaps, but I kinda like the unique touch it adds :/

Deku Link has the top of his arm wider than the wrist, whereas yours are just one pixel lines.

Especially because the flower holding arm is extremely thin. My biggest problem with this sprite. I think if you were to extend the outline to have that lonely white armpit pixel as the bottom of the arm, it would look much better and allow more room for details and such.
And it could use some shading, seeing as it can have more than one solid colour.

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Post Re: Damian works Elegy of Dekuness
Living Shadow wrote:
Proton wrote:
Damian wrote:
Currently drawing Byakitten's request.

In the meantime, can someone critique this?
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The contrast in the wooden-coloured parts needs an incease.Agreed. So does hair.

One of the shades on the hat (the one between the brightest and darkest) is worthless.[img]I%20didn't%20even%20notice%20there%20was%20one.%20So,%20yeah...[/img]
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If the the entire body and outfit is outlined in solid black, then the hair should be too.Perhaps, but I kinda like the unique touch it adds :/
How is that unique?
You can't just have the gloves and tunic outlined in the body but then cut out the hair.
That's clashing with the style.

Deku Link has the top of his arm wider than the wrist, whereas yours are just one pixel lines.

Especially because the flower holding arm is extremely thin. My biggest problem with this sprite. I think if you were to extend the outline to have that lonely white armpit pixel as the bottom of the arm, it would look much better and allow more room for details and such.
And it could use some shading, seeing as it can have more than one solid colour.
Sun Sep 12, 2010 3:39 pm
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Post Re: Damian works Elegy of Dekuness
Very nice, Damian! I've always loved Deku Link the best.

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Post Re: Damian works Elegy of Dekuness
If all goes according to plan, and if my friend can fix my scanner, then I should have a 'special' update tommrow.

Something about incompetence.

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Post Re: Damian works Elegy of Dekuness
i really like that hat stage

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Post Re: Damian works Elegy of Dekuness
How is the Otaku Assassin Damian coming along?

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How is the Otaku Assassin Damian coming along?


Scanner failing hard and dying on me, currently activating Plan B. With some luck, I could have it done by the weekend.

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Post Re: Damian works Elegy of Dekuness
Nice job so far on redoing Sanji
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Post Re: Damian works Elegy of Dekuness
"Weekend". It's the "weekend".

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Post Re: Damian works WHERE IS YOUR GOD NOW?!
Finally had some time to sprite something for myself (and too play some Okami), the result?

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Not finished yet, still need to add the the God Instrument, Issun and the ear twitch, a couple of body fixes, but it's a start.

It is an (heavy) edit, here is the original sprite:
http://sdb.drshnaps.com/display.php?object=1324

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Post Re: Damian works WHERE IS YOUR GOD NOW?!
Damian wrote:
Finally had some time to sprite something for myself (and too play some Okami), the result?

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Not finished yet, still need to add the the God Instrument, Issun and the ear twitch, a couple of body fixes, but it's a start.

It is an (heavy) edit, here is the original sprite:
http://sdb.drshnaps.com/display.php?object=1324

Oh and,[ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ya3yxTbkh5s&feature=related ]

The sprite is cute, reminds me of my recently passed away cat : (

I remember when I asked you to sprite Baby Mr. L. (my obsession in those days), for the car and recolor.
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about 90% done I guess.

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