Name: Antonio protagonista (Tony, for short)

Age: 22

Race: Human

Personality: A slacker who only does work if he gets some kind of reward. He enjoys being lazy. Though easily angered, he can calm himself down instantly or; vice versa, he can make himself angry if need be.

Appearance: Tall, normal size, brown hair, blue eyes, slight beard, cargo pants, sweatshirt. His hair is inbetween short and kinda long. He normally attaches a Katana to his waist in case of emergencies.

Abilities: He can control people's feelings and thoughts towards things, mostly for personal gain. He could make you believe that liver and onions is good, that Santa Claus doesn't have a beard, that you love eating coal, etc.
He was born with this, and first discovered it when he was 12 years old. He figured out he could control his mother to buy him select gifts, figured out how he did it, and then mastered the ability.

Background: He was born to parents who died shortly after he was born. A princess found him later and gave him rich foster parents who spoiled him. That's where he got so lazy. After he turned 21, he left the house without warning or a note. He has been since traveling by himself mostly, occasionally meeting up with creatures that he befriends.


My first, is it good? Ugh I hate making these.

Its ok but if he has a tail then his race isn't human and I think his ability is too cheap but overall good.

Where the f*** does it say that?

whoops I thought tall was tail for a second there. Sorry Eraser.(my glasses wasn't on.) but still his ability IS pretty cheap.

Fine, but cheap.

* With that kind of ability, there would be no use of battle, as he could force his opponent to admit defeat. Sort of like godmodding.

Would it work against the emotionless robots, the beings far beyond the control of mere mortals, and a sniper round in the face?

You've got a point.

Still, judging by the katana around his waist, robots and snipers weren't invented yet. So they'd pretty much need to hire an assassin to take care of him.

Yeah, I didn't want to overdo it with "HE HAS TES LAZZORS DAT SHUT AT U AND KEEL U!!!1"
Plus I like swords over guns. Guns do give an advantage, but there's nothing like slicing your hated enemy in half.

Over the internet, of course.

So then what timeline is he in?

Hmm... I never thought about that. I'd say he was born roughly 1940, maybe?
I have to think about it. Do you have any suggestions?

I dunno, it's your character, you know what would be best for him.

*clap, clap*

1940 and wears a katana? That's incredibly dumb with the inventions of guns, and not to mention how much he sticks out.

Firearms were around for hundreds of years, but I forgot when guns were invented.