Broken record, if you expect it, stop crying about it


I intend to improve the sprites as I said, But I doubt they would satisfy your needs anyway

I'll stop when things have changed for the better, which they have absolutely no sign of doing.

They'll satisfy my needs when they're good enough to satisfy my needs. And that particular point at which they will do so is when true effort is put into them. When there is a willingness to improve. I do not considering this copying to be an effort or willingness to improve. Editing even less so.

Overall, they look great.
At least, until they're animated... Then Evilagram has a point.
Just, put in more transition frames.

I think this is everything I have up to date so far,




http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r14/ ... PEriko.png

There are still missing parts like re-colors and Eriko's tail

Me likey

^.^

An Electric move I was working on


Plus the updated sheet
http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r14/ ... ogress.png



Random stuff over a day or two I made but didn't care to post or finish making






Anyways does anyone have any good ideas for Thunder attacks I could try ?

The electric wave could use some more detail.

Doesnt look like it's moving across the surface, kinda looks like a slash.

Unfinshed Icons I was messing around with to prove I was alive , I'm still trying to make snow and Deux (Snows portrait and some sort of element attack from Deux) But i'm not liking the blue glow around the swords



I'll try and get some Eriko stuff up after I get back to my computer

I like the animated elements behind them : D

Maybe if it began at the middle and transitioned outward, it would look better. Like Dmon said, it looks like a slash.

Oooh, that looks really good. If you have time, could you try flipping the black or the white... swords, is it? Try flipping on of them, and see how it looks.
Or maybe I'm just weird.

TLOK Work sheet




Nah not weird I tried it but didn't like it at first , it's growing on me though makes both sides look even.

(not animated yet)

Got this far in the PA/avatar some suggestions would be appreciated, it looks too plain

Hey Ray, it's been a long time.

It's nice to see you've been spriting, I remember you had that mini movie thing with the

custom smilies. Good times, but I digress. It seems you want to have some quality sprites and nice

animations to match them.

for this post I'm only commenting on this particular one, its very late her and well I'm finally getting sleepy.

But before I go I'd like to make some small suggestions that I think would be a great asset to your animation

First I'd like to admit I didn't actually realize it was an electric based attack the first time I say it. I thought it was

some sort of water/ice shield technique. Sorry, but it doesn't give off much of an electric feel to it (my opinion not fact realize this).
The wave inside the aura comes off to thick, I think I get what you are trying to do.

The wave comes off as an impact (if your going for shield) or a surge to show it exists.

For this sort of thing I recommend looking at this.
Some good effect references

Particularly the last one of course.

the electric shield is wavy and follows the characteristics of an electric energy flow.

Long story short make it more wavy I guess =P

I hope this is of help, and now g'night.

Looking nice, but I would scrap the current fox sprite and start over, its pretty hideous.