Nice song. It's pleasent to listen to.

However, there are some things I think could be better. Although it's a very calm song, I feel as though there could be a little more movement. It was pretty boring by about 1:30. It has a simple and short theme, so you need to vary that theme a little to make it interesting. Also, I don't know if you can do this, but the abrupt ending at the end could use more ring IMO.

I liked that remix for the most part, but I think the melody could've been more emphasized.

my two cents:
wasn't awful.
very ambient/drone-y, which I like a lot. really love how you played up that element - works surprisingly well within the context of the song. adds some flair while still being true to the source material.
instrumentation could be improved on, in particular the percussion seems rather sterile and unfitting. kinda like you lazily mixed in a FL Studio preset drum pack and called it a day. it adds an undesirable contrast and distracts from the influx of pleasant, droning melodies which add up to be the main catch of the track.
another user suggested that you add a bit of variation. I second this, but do it subtly. don't just throw in some obvious twists and turns for the sake of it, keep in line with the flow of the song.
that's really all I have to say.

I didn't like this one as much. IMO the main theme doesn't blend very well with the background. Beyond that, a pretty basic remix.