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Specialk827 wrote:
Chaosvii7 wrote:
It's awful. That whole tutorial is awful. And no, it doesn't teach you JUS. It teaches you "eye-bleeding pillow shade improbably bad palette no sense of anatomy" style.


Are you saying the sprite is bad or that the tutorial is bad?

I worked pretty hard on this, so does anyone have any real constructive criticism?


Both.

If you want to learn JUS, you can't rely on that tut. To add insult to injury, it just looks like a recolor of the sprite Necrolium used in the tut, which, as we all know, recoloring is godawful and bad and should kill you inside.

The shading is wonky and nowhere near JUS style.

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Specialk827 wrote:
Chaosvii7 wrote:
It's awful. That whole tutorial is awful. And no, it doesn't teach you JUS. It teaches you "eye-bleeding pillow shade improbably bad palette no sense of anatomy" style.


Are you saying the sprite is bad or that the tutorial is bad?

I worked pretty hard on this, so does anyone have any real constructive criticism?

next time look at a jus sprite and compare yours to it you will intresting resluts from this

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next time look at a jus sprite and compare yours to it you will intresting resluts from this


How will comparing JUS sprites give you interesting results of a google search coincidentally producing a large amount of links to pornographic sites?


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I'ma post my first animation (or rather second due to a misplace in files) tommorow.


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I have done Saki Amaiya. and wondering if anyone could finish?

I only need the arm holding a gun and pants/shirt disign.

...Does anyone know a diferent image hoster besides imageshack?

Right now my computer is being dumb and blocking many sites.

EDIT: Right now it on my avatar so could anyone edit?

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http://spamtheweb.com/ul/s107201038_ssj4goku.html

any constructive criticism

and yes i know the tail looks weird ill fix that later
i don't know if this is a minor,regular,or major edit so please tell me

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I'm a kiss-ass! +1 post!


You're right, math is wrong. Fix it.


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Mr.Mario123 wrote:
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/s107201038_ssj4goku.html

any constructive criticism

and yes i know the tail looks weird ill fix that later
i don't know if this is a minor,regular,or major edit so please tell me

Pretty bad.

Looks too much like Goku non-SSJ in every way other than outfit.


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Proton Fusion wrote:
Mr.Mario123 wrote:
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/s107201038_ssj4goku.html

any constructive criticism

and yes i know the tail looks weird ill fix that later
i don't know if this is a minor,regular,or major edit so please tell me

Pretty bad.

Looks too much like Goku non-SSJ in every way other than outfit.


thats why i picked goku non-ssj because ssj4 is more primitive so even though he has
a superior sort of attitude he is more primitive so i edited goku, i recolored the pants,i changed the upper body,
added more hair(still working on that),added abbs(still working on that too),recolored the shoes,added detail to the eyes,
and added anti-anialising(or whatever thats called),and look at a reference picture thats sorta how ssj4 goku looks like

Image

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Notorio wrote:
ElvisDitto wrote:
Thaiberium wrote:

I'm a kiss-ass! +1 post!


You're right, math is wrong. Fix it.


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Mr.Mario123 wrote:
Proton Fusion wrote:
Mr.Mario123 wrote:
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/s107201038_ssj4goku.html

any constructive criticism

and yes i know the tail looks weird ill fix that later
i don't know if this is a minor,regular,or major edit so please tell me

Pretty bad.

Looks too much like Goku non-SSJ in every way other than outfit.


thats why i picked goku non-ssj because ssj4 is more primitive so even though he has
a superior sort of attitude he is more primitive so i edited goku, i recolored the pants,i changed the upper body,
added more hair(still working on that),added abbs(still working on that too),recolored the shoes,added detail to the eyes,
and added anti-anialising(or whatever thats called),and look at a reference picture thats sorta how ssj4 goku looks like

Image


Yeah, I know who he is.
That's how I knew and said it didn't look like SSJ4 Goku, except for the outfit.


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Proton Fusion wrote:
Mr.Mario123 wrote:
Proton Fusion wrote:
Mr.Mario123 wrote:
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/s107201038_ssj4goku.html

any constructive criticism

and yes i know the tail looks weird ill fix that later
i don't know if this is a minor,regular,or major edit so please tell me

Pretty bad.

Looks too much like Goku non-SSJ in every way other than outfit.


thats why i picked goku non-ssj because ssj4 is more primitive so even though he has
a superior sort of attitude he is more primitive so i edited goku, i recolored the pants,i changed the upper body,
added more hair(still working on that),added abbs(still working on that too),recolored the shoes,added detail to the eyes,
and added anti-anialising(or whatever thats called),and look at a reference picture thats sorta how ssj4 goku looks like

Image


Yeah, I know who he is.
That's how I knew and said it didn't look like SSJ4 Goku, except for the outfit.


what do you mean by the outfit explain please all your just saying if outfit and if you read everything you should know this is an edit
so how am i supposed to have a custom stance(if i finish editing all of goku ill make some custom attacks and a custom stance)

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Notorio wrote:
ElvisDitto wrote:
Thaiberium wrote:

I'm a kiss-ass! +1 post!


You're right, math is wrong. Fix it.


SSF2 Mains:Mario,Luigi,Goku,Ichigo,Naruto,Sonic,Lloyld (sorry if i didn't spell right) not in order from fav main to least fav main


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@MR.mario123 He said that the only thing that made him look like SSJ4 goku was the costume.


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Red wrote:
@MR.mario123 He said that the only thing that made him look like SSJ4 goku was the costume.

WELL, would you fancy that >_>


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Red wrote:
@MR.mario123 He said that the only thing that made him look like SSJ4 goku was the costume.


well yea isn't that what edits are about and besides im still working on it like i said but i decieded the hair is final(although as you can see it looks like its shaking back and forth so im going to fix that after my next update) there's no more
space for hair other than pixel thin strips of hair, i added more stuff like those bracelets on the legs,dulled the bracelets,i still haven't fixed the abbs,i not finishing until i get a positive post about my edited sprite or until i feel satisfied

edit:http://spamtheweb.com/ul/s1172010271_ssj4goku.html now i have to fix the leg bracelets,the hair,the abbs,and other stuff

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Notorio wrote:
ElvisDitto wrote:
Thaiberium wrote:

I'm a kiss-ass! +1 post!


You're right, math is wrong. Fix it.


SSF2 Mains:Mario,Luigi,Goku,Ichigo,Naruto,Sonic,Lloyld (sorry if i didn't spell right) not in order from fav main to least fav main


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greenguy[Mr.M] wrote:
Red wrote:
@MR.mario123 He said that the only thing that made him look like SSJ4 goku was the costume.


well yea isn't that what edits are about and besides im still working on it like i said but i decieded the hair is final(although as you can see it looks like its shaking back and forth so im going to fix that after my next update) there's no more
space for hair other than pixel thin strips of hair, i added more stuff like those bracelets on the legs,dulled the bracelets,i still haven't fixed the abbs,i not finishing until i get a positive post about my edited sprite or until i feel satisfied

edit:http://spamtheweb.com/ul/s1172010271_ssj4goku.html now i have to fix the leg bracelets,the hair,the abbs,and other stuff

The tail needs to be fixed and the hair doesn't look like that picture you posted.

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