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Yangfly Master
Joined: Sat Aug 22, 2015 7:05 am Posts: 28 Location: Somewhere Country:
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Zatch Bell
Waifu: Aqua Sama
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Hello I do some Pixel Art/ Sprites, any C+C is appreciated. Most of the Pixel Art stuff I've been doing is related to Rpg Maker and uses Templates, not created by me, so I don't think it would do any good to post here. However I've a bunch of Non-RM related stuff, so I'm looking for critiques on these. Ok... This one I made, when I was designing a Character from my Rpg Maker game. Fail attempt at Fire Emblem Style...(Based on a Rpg Maker Rtp Character) Another Fail attempt at Fire Emblem Style(This time is an OC) Moving sprite of an OC, Fire Emblem Style Standing sprite of an OC, Fire Emblem Style Battle Sprite of an OC, Fire Emblem(It has an complete Animation, but I've got no f*** idea how to record Gifs from the emulator) Oldar Stuff Some portraits: Dark Pit: Ike: Kirby: Mario: Master Core: Pikachu: Slime(Dragon Quest): Sonic: Villager(Yeah, i know i missed a "L" ) Yoshi: Young Link: Some Itens: Mushroom: Poison Mushroom: PokeBall: And that's all Folks! (Positive C+C is greatly appreciated)
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Sun Aug 23, 2015 8:15 am |
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TheRealHeroOfWinds
Joined: Thu Dec 23, 2010 12:16 pm Posts: 1583 Country:
Gender: Anime Girl
MGN Username: TheRealHeroOfWinds
Skype: TheRealHeroOfWinds
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jit-ter please leave the forum
we didn't want you before, we don't want you now
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Sun Aug 23, 2015 2:28 pm |
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Lisnovski
Joined: Wed Oct 15, 2014 8:03 pm Posts: 882 Country:
MGN Username: Lisnovski1
Skype: lisnovski1
Currently Playing: Super Smash Flash 2 Beta
Waifu: Myself
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Oh yes, I rememer seein these. Don't know if it waas here or in another forums.
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Sun Aug 23, 2015 2:31 pm |
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Yangfly Master
Joined: Sat Aug 22, 2015 7:05 am Posts: 28 Location: Somewhere Country:
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Zatch Bell
Waifu: Aqua Sama
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Relax, I've no intention of messing here. Just want to get critiques and that's all.
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Sun Aug 23, 2015 2:32 pm |
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Steven
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Joined: Wed Nov 12, 2008 4:13 pm Posts: 7252 Country:
Gender: Male
Waifu: ElvisDitto
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Is there anything specific you'd like feedback on?
In general the first thing that caught my eye is that while your shading and lineart techniques are already pretty good, your anatomy is a off. You could practise more with that by studying poses.
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Sun Aug 23, 2015 2:33 pm |
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Yangfly Master
Joined: Sat Aug 22, 2015 7:05 am Posts: 28 Location: Somewhere Country:
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Zatch Bell
Waifu: Aqua Sama
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@Steven Critiques in general, how to make them look better, those kind of things. @TheHealHeroOfWinds I don't mind the hating. You can hate me as you want. Also try to get better at Grammar, since you claim you're American.
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Sun Aug 23, 2015 2:38 pm |
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Steven
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Joined: Wed Nov 12, 2008 4:13 pm Posts: 7252 Country:
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From your old stuff I can tell that you've already made really good progress on every aspect of pixel art, so kuddos. But like I said, I think anatomy is currently your weakpoint so you should practise more with that. The way arms connect to the body for example, arm muscles, and how the facial area is organized (where the facial features go and what not). You can find lots of good poses on google to study and to practise with, give it a try sometime. Also just a bit of a tip on something esle; if you feel someone is rude to you, there is no need to be rude/a smartass back. You don't need to let people walk over you for sure, but you don't need to sink to that level either. If someone is rude to you you should either just ignore it and be the bigger person or contact the mods. But youll find that everyone here is pretty chill once you get to know them I think.
Last edited by Steven on Sun Aug 23, 2015 2:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Yangfly Master
Joined: Sat Aug 22, 2015 7:05 am Posts: 28 Location: Somewhere Country:
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Zatch Bell
Waifu: Aqua Sama
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@Steven Thank you for your critiques. I Shall post edited versions soon.
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Sun Aug 23, 2015 2:49 pm |
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Lukepi
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Joined: Mon Dec 12, 2011 9:29 am Posts: 7690 Location: Hell Country:
Gender: N/A
Currently Playing: Sekiro, Persona 4
Waifu: That’s right. PS4.
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Who do you think you are, dude? I don't care if this is smasherlink, you don't speak this way to other users. He isn't even causing any trouble, he's just asking for critique. You're being a c-word for no reason. OP; you're fine. You're not doing anything wrong. Carry on.
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Sun Aug 23, 2015 4:28 pm |
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GBomber465
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Joined: Sat Mar 21, 2015 9:05 pm Posts: 209 Country:
Gender: Male
MGN Username: GBomber465
Currently Playing: SSF2, Project M and Phoenix Wright
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Those are pretty great. But like Steven said, practice your anatomy and facial properties. Dude, what's the need to act like that? What he even did to you, anyway?
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