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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Kirb-Star
Waifu: zero suit wario
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Sorry for no comment your sprites. (I got Banned...) Also, the Baron Sprite is very Good! (I saw the movie last week. Coincidence? Probbably...)
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Wed Apr 03, 2013 12:06 pm |
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DettaDoodle
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:18 am Posts: 899 Location: drowning in pixels and waifus
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Detta
Waifu: Zinnia
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updated css has new totoro and no face artworks
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Fri Apr 05, 2013 12:17 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Kirb-Star
Waifu: zero suit wario
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Good as always det.
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Fri Apr 05, 2013 3:06 pm |
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DettaDoodle
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:18 am Posts: 899 Location: drowning in pixels and waifus
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Detta
Waifu: Zinnia
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New Totoro, as well as Totoroko and Totorochisai (they'll show up in parts of Totoro's moveset).
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Sat Apr 06, 2013 10:20 pm |
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DJ Wizard Cop
BR Member
Joined: Wed Dec 22, 2010 10:38 pm Posts: 425
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Chaconne
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Gettin' real tired of your banding, Det. (Hat)
In all seriousness though, the new Totoro is great. Some AA on the the eye might be cool, as well as fixing the jaggy shading above the nose. Light source isn't 100% consistent. Shadow from the hat, highlights on the hat, thearmwesee could maybe cast a shadow on the body and thearmwedon'tsee's shading could be a little less diagonal.
Much better though.
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Sat Apr 06, 2013 10:43 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Kirb-Star
Waifu: zero suit wario
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Awesome spritesas ever! :3
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Sat Apr 06, 2013 11:25 pm |
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DettaDoodle
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:18 am Posts: 899 Location: drowning in pixels and waifus
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Detta
Waifu: Zinnia
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Kiki, Jiji, and various accessories. Last public update until all characters are finished.
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Sun Apr 07, 2013 4:02 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Kirb-Star
Waifu: zero suit wario
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You need to work more on Kiki/Jiji, but the colors are fine.
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Sun Apr 07, 2013 4:23 pm |
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Suli
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:40 am Posts: 1505 Location: Los Angeles Country:
Gender: Anime Girl
MGN Username: Suli
Skype: na_suliboy
Currently Playing: Fire Emblem 1-13, Tales of Xillia/Graces, Smash 4
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Jiji's fine for it's size, but I agree about Kiki; she doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the sprites, in that she looks...I dunno, like you spent less time on her. All the rest look a lot better. Not saying it's bad, but maybe you could invest in revamping her.
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Sun Apr 07, 2013 4:38 pm |
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DettaDoodle
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:18 am Posts: 899 Location: drowning in pixels and waifus
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Detta
Waifu: Zinnia
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Yeah, I'm having trouble figuring out what to do to make her dress look better. I think she looks fine other than that. Only problem is that 2/3 of her sprite is her dress. :T
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Sun Apr 07, 2013 4:57 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Kirb-Star
Waifu: zero suit wario
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Hmmm... Maybe you could make a body an then the Dress?
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Sun Apr 07, 2013 5:00 pm |
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DettaDoodle
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:18 am Posts: 899 Location: drowning in pixels and waifus
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Detta
Waifu: Zinnia
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Should be better now. 5 pixels shorter, more defined chest area and shading on the hair.
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Sun Apr 07, 2013 5:19 pm |
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Suli
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:40 am Posts: 1505 Location: Los Angeles Country:
Gender: Anime Girl
MGN Username: Suli
Skype: na_suliboy
Currently Playing: Fire Emblem 1-13, Tales of Xillia/Graces, Smash 4
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While it looks better now, I still think that you could change the pose altogether.
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Sun Apr 07, 2013 5:22 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Kirb-Star
Waifu: zero suit wario
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Better, but it still needs work. Also, the shading in the Dress is a bit... strange. Good Luck.
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Sun Apr 07, 2013 5:23 pm |
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DettaDoodle
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:18 am Posts: 899 Location: drowning in pixels and waifus
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Detta
Waifu: Zinnia
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It's a single frame for a base. The main point of the current sheet (and the bases in general) is so I have a combination of palettes, sizes/proportions, and general style for when I get to making animations for them in the future. The frames I have right now likely won't be used even in the idle animations. I could try and make a new pose for her like I did for Totoro, but if the only minor problem is the pose, then I'm not going to bother for now. When I go back and fix No Face and Porco Rosso I might revisit her though.
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Sun Apr 07, 2013 5:29 pm |
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