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my video game sprites (kirby n' Mario n' stuffiez) 
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Its mario, alright?Image
mishapen, badly shaded goomba Image
kirby n tomatoes Image
these were made using sploder. (the game creator site)
also there is the stuff in my signature\/

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Tue Jul 30, 2013 2:43 pm
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The style is interesting in a way

Your lineart is the only thing that needs work. And your shading too, if it's even supposed to be shaded.

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Tue Jul 30, 2013 2:49 pm
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Thanks! Im horrible at shading so I didnt do it for most of them but I'll try :smile:

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Tue Jul 30, 2013 2:54 pm
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It's not really noticable, but I shaded it.
(I did this in like 2 minutes)

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Tue Jul 30, 2013 3:13 pm
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Brotip: Making Titles like that only makes people less interested in helping you. Treat your own work with at least a bit of dignity.

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Tue Jul 30, 2013 3:21 pm
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^This, and come on dude, they're not THAT BAD. I kinda made worse things.

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imagine having sex with a clown though
instead of a dick he just has one of those flowers that shoots water out


Tue Jul 30, 2013 3:25 pm
You show potential.
You should outline the drawings.
Also, mario's hands should be shaped.
If you are willing to take critism, and want to take your
art to the next level, add more detail! Like this:
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Don't resize your sprite either, it can ruin more edits and critism.
(BTW, I don't know if your using MS Paint, but try out Paint.Net)


Tue Jul 30, 2013 4:36 pm
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^ That isn't much better at all.

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Tue Jul 30, 2013 6:20 pm
TehKrazeh1 wrote:
^ That isn't much better at all.

Lol, I realized when I posted it.


Tue Jul 30, 2013 6:37 pm
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your sprites look like they could be used for a fun looking 8 bit game

i've seen good games that use sprites similar to this without outlines
so if you're going for that type of style, it's pretty good

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Tue Jul 30, 2013 7:09 pm
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Psycho wrote:
your sprites look like they could be used for a fun looking 8 bit game

i've seen good games that use sprites similar to this without outlines
so if you're going for that type of style, it's pretty good

Like Cave Story? That game was a masterpiece.

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imagine having sex with a clown though
instead of a dick he just has one of those flowers that shoots water out


Tue Jul 30, 2013 7:25 pm

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Clubby the bear wrote:
TehKrazeh1 wrote:
^ That isn't much better at all.

Lol, I realized when I posted it.



No you didnt

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Pochiman wrote:
Psycho wrote:
your sprites look like they could be used for a fun looking 8 bit game

i've seen good games that use sprites similar to this without outlines
so if you're going for that type of style, it's pretty good

Like Cave Story? That game was a masterpiece.


ooh i wasn't even thinking about cave story but yeah
sorta like cave story

there was also this game called dino run that was pretty fun and nice looking a few years ago

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Tue Jul 30, 2013 7:43 pm
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Steven wrote:
Brotip: Making Titles like that only makes people less interested in helping you. Treat your own work with at least a bit of dignity.

I (think I) changed the Title :smile:
Heres the outlined one (with a few changes)Image
Heres Kirby (I didnt do an outline and you can just barely see the shading)Image
poor, poor, goomba, he's not getting any love :sweat:

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Tue Jul 30, 2013 7:48 pm
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~Black Magik~ wrote:
Clubby the bear wrote:
TehKrazeh1 wrote:
^ That isn't much better at all.

Lol, I realized when I posted it.



No you didnt


Lmfao dis nygguh

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