I'm not sure weither that's a insult or a complement. And can you seriously give reasons
WHY you even like/dislike it?

He probably won't post anymore.
<.<;;
That was his first post, and I've got my reasons to say that.

and those reasons are...?

Progress on a PA request.
Anything I should change, evilgram?

Who's Evilgram?


Try shading the hair from the light source. That and learning how to make hair.

Work on anatomy in general. In addition to learning how to make folds in clothing. The head's structure doesn't make much sense. It seems skewed, and the jawbone is pressed back into the neck.

I'll fix the folds, and the reason for the jawbone being that way, is because his head's kinda leaning down. Also, can you give me an example of a good way to do hair?

If something is tilted down, then try forshortening, not pressing things through each other.

You're making the hair too solid, in addition to making it incorrectly if it were solid. In real life people have a tendency to draw hair as individual strands, ignoring the overall form. You've done the opposite, the form being emphacised too much. It needs to blend more.

The hair also has way too much complexity in too small a space. Things overlap, and don't flow well. What you have there should end up as a disorganized mess, but due to the emphasis on form, it ends up looking ridiculous.

I'll try to improve the head.

Also, I have to make the hair flater, anyways, so I'll try to make it see better

Also, can you give me a small sprite of a kind of texture you would do for hair on a PA? That way it'll be easier for me to understand a little more of what you're saying.

I get bored easily:

Did it in about 30 seconds

You are very skilled in Avatar making This is a skill you should focus on.

wha-? I wasn't really making an avitar. I just got bored. Plus I don't really call that "Skill". All I did was make something in less than a minute... But, whatever.

simulation credit auto
Wow, It's very aurprising!
I can't believe in my eyes that you did it in about 30 seconds, Mr. Noodlle.
Good job ^^

should it suprise you that that would be made in 30 seconds by anyone?

I created a character I call "Merb" at school while I was doodling.

Good job. At first I was kind of weirded out, but then the coolness sank in. That's a nice style of doodling.