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Chaosvii7
Joined: Tue Aug 26, 2008 12:58 am Posts: 564 Location: Probably going to Hell.
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Let's use Daddy's Welfare Haphazardly
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I like this style. Keep it.
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Thu Jan 20, 2011 9:14 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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No update moved it cuz idk how lazy people are and they may not look back a page. XP I dont particularly like it. I think im only going to have a shoulder thing on his right shoulder. I hate the shoes. :/ so what are peoples opinions on the changes to him?
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Thu Jan 20, 2011 11:20 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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Soo. I did a few minor adjustments. Still merely concept. I do quite like the head. Thats about it.
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Fri Jan 21, 2011 6:34 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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I'm hoping ill actually get a reply if its not all just concept... Right now its merely recolor and minor edit to see how well my concepts work. So far, not well. HOWEVER, i do plan on re spriting Glitch again soon. Thinner and more demented looking. Also, i cant seem to ever shade shoulder pads correctly. That was honestly the main reason for me removing it in the first place. Also, the brown hair was only added because there was too much black. Too many places. Got confusing. But its going to have to be darker. So can anyone give me some tips on how to shade shoulder things? So. Yeah...
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Sun Jan 23, 2011 2:00 am |
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Mr. Shoop
Joined: Sat Aug 28, 2010 8:36 am Posts: 1048 Location: Made in China Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: mr.shoop
Currently Playing: Force of Will, League of Legends, Yu-Gi-Oh!
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Sun Jan 23, 2011 9:50 am |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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The no was implied. Sorry.
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Sun Jan 23, 2011 12:08 pm |
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Mr. Shoop
Joined: Sat Aug 28, 2010 8:36 am Posts: 1048 Location: Made in China Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: mr.shoop
Currently Playing: Force of Will, League of Legends, Yu-Gi-Oh!
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It's okay!
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Sun Jan 23, 2011 1:02 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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| | | | Glitch wrote: [ Image ] I'm hoping ill actually get a reply if its not all just concept... Right now its merely recolor and minor edit to see how well my concepts work. So far, not well. HOWEVER, i do plan on re spriting Glitch again soon. Thinner and more demented looking. Also, i cant seem to ever shade shoulder pads correctly. That was honestly the main reason for me removing it in the first place. Also, the brown hair was only added because there was too much black. Too many places. Got confusing. But its going to have to be darker. So can anyone give me some tips on how to shade shoulder things? So. Yeah... | | | | |
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Fri Jan 28, 2011 9:16 pm |
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Geno
Site Admin
Joined: Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:32 am Posts: 11709 Country:
Gender: Anime Girl
Currently Playing: Undertale
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Oh, so now my JUS sprite is inaccurate xD
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Fri Jan 28, 2011 9:30 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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Technically no every charecter goes through some changes some time. It's previous versions still existed
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Sat Jan 29, 2011 12:45 am |
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Super Duper
Joined: Sat Aug 01, 2009 6:28 pm Posts: 394
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Amnesia, Mine Craft and MvC3
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lol 69 but Here... [/quote] Its you wip so... First: one leg is begger than the other. second: knee caps don't go his things. Third: Colors are kind of bad they fade in with each other to much. Last: Shading is bad.
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Sun Jan 30, 2011 3:48 am |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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Its you wip so... First: one leg is begger than the other. second: knee caps don't go his things.Third: Colors are kind of bad they fade in with each other to much.Last: Shading is bad.[/quote] 1 What...? 2 yeah im fixing the pallette soon 3 explain how so i can improve, please.
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Sun Jan 30, 2011 6:59 am |
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Super Duper
Joined: Sat Aug 01, 2009 6:28 pm Posts: 394
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Amnesia, Mine Craft and MvC3
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| | | | Glitch wrote: Its you wip so... First: one leg is begger than the other. second: His knee caps should not go in his thigh.Third: Colors are kind of bad, they fade in with each other to much making it.Last: Shading is bad. | | | | |
1 What...? 2 yeah im fixing the pallette soon 3 explain how so i can improve, please.[/quote] Lol my grammar fail me and I failed it.
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Sun Jan 30, 2011 1:54 pm |
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Nick
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229
Gender: N/A
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Its hard to judge without movement/animation... and the shading and pallet are both good it is actually just the shape/figure... 1. He has no a** 2. He has no knees 3. Arms are way to short 4. Hands look like blobs 5. Has no ankles 6. The torso is fine but the bottom of the shirt flows unnaturally So basically get a bit better at the shape itself everything else is fine, remember as long as the pallet is what you like it to be then it's not wrong. Shading is good but its not amazing and shouldn't be your main priority. Edit: I made some quick progression on your sprite using my own guidelines and got this, now I want to see what you can do! SHOW ME HOW ITS DUN! http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/1699/16570097.pngMine isn't really better but its fun to compare and try out other peoples ideas sometimes =]
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Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:16 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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1 since when do you see someones a** looking at them from the front? 4 lolwut? The rest: I'm aware of the anatomy issues, that's not my most recent version? People need to pay attention... And yeah I'm making a new base soon. Which if said already. So yeah. Thank you though, I greatly appreciate it.
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Sun Jan 30, 2011 11:41 pm |
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