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Nile for Phoenix Remedy 

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Nile for Phoenix Remedy 
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Post Re: Nile for Phoenix Remedy
Snoble wrote:
Mystyr Nile wrote:
Name:Nile
EDIT: Name: Mystyr Nile
Age:15 Child Prodigy.
Birthday: Feb 8
Talents: Mixed Martial Arts
Appearance: angular face; buff ; 5 fingers per hand
Height: 9'2'', 110'', 3.056yrds(2.794m) 9'2"? All realism has been dropped. Especially since he's only 15.
Wingspan: 12'10'', 154'', 4.278yrds(3.912m)...what
Weight: 924lbs (419.12kg 66stone) A 924 pound fifteen year old? Does he have an eating disorder?
Body Mass Index(BMI): 52.8(2*average human BMI) His BMI is actually 53.7.
Race: Giant
Veteran: no, too young
Backstory: Nile's village has been destroyed by a wildfire and he has been searching all over and around Varsk for any survivors of the fire, but to no avail. One day, Nile found a strange tunnel in a rip through the air. After a few seconds of staring at this tunnel, it sucked him into it, and he found himself in a mysterious Island(Phoenix). EDIT: The tunnel knocked him out on reentry. This does not tell us anything about the character's personality.
Gender:Male
And it's already accepted by WarPanda!


I'm no expert, but my opinions are in bold.

race: giant
Sun Jan 17, 2010 7:50 pm
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Post Re: Nile for Phoenix Remedy
:'( wrote:
Snoble wrote:
Mystyr Nile wrote:
Name:Nile
EDIT: Name: Mystyr Nile
Age:15 Child Prodigy.
Birthday: Feb 8
Talents: Mixed Martial Arts
Appearance: angular face; buff ; 5 fingers per hand
Height: 9'2'', 110'', 3.056yrds(2.794m) 9'2"? All realism has been dropped. Especially since he's only 15.
Wingspan: 12'10'', 154'', 4.278yrds(3.912m)...what
Weight: 924lbs (419.12kg 66stone) A 924 pound fifteen year old? Does he have an eating disorder?
Body Mass Index(BMI): 52.8(2*average human BMI) His BMI is actually 53.7.
Race: Giant
Veteran: no, too young
Backstory: Nile's village has been destroyed by a wildfire and he has been searching all over and around Varsk for any survivors of the fire, but to no avail. One day, Nile found a strange tunnel in a rip through the air. After a few seconds of staring at this tunnel, it sucked him into it, and he found himself in a mysterious Island(Phoenix). EDIT: The tunnel knocked him out on reentry. This does not tell us anything about the character's personality.
Gender:Male
And it's already accepted by WarPanda!


I'm no expert, but my opinions are in bold.

race: giant


But even then he's only 15.
Sun Jan 17, 2010 8:16 pm
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Post Re: Nile for Phoenix Remedy
Snoble wrote:
:'( wrote:
Snoble wrote:
Mystyr Nile wrote:
Name:Nile
EDIT: Name: Mystyr Nile
Age:15 Child Prodigy.
Birthday: Feb 8
Talents: Mixed Martial Arts
Appearance: angular face; buff ; 5 fingers per hand
Height: 9'2'', 110'', 3.056yrds(2.794m) 9'2"? All realism has been dropped. Especially since he's only 15.
Wingspan: 12'10'', 154'', 4.278yrds(3.912m)...what
Weight: 924lbs (419.12kg 66stone) A 924 pound fifteen year old? Does he have an eating disorder?
Body Mass Index(BMI): 52.8(2*average human BMI) His BMI is actually 53.7.
Race: Giant
Veteran: no, too young
Backstory: Nile's village has been destroyed by a wildfire and he has been searching all over and around Varsk for any survivors of the fire, but to no avail. One day, Nile found a strange tunnel in a rip through the air. After a few seconds of staring at this tunnel, it sucked him into it, and he found himself in a mysterious Island(Phoenix). EDIT: The tunnel knocked him out on reentry. This does not tell us anything about the character's personality.
Gender:Male
And it's already accepted by WarPanda!


I'm no expert, but my opinions are in bold.

race: giant


But even then he's only 15.
You're REALLY going to discuss the height and weight of a creature that doesn't exist? It's like hearing people b**** about whether or not goblins and orce are related. Retarded.

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Sun Jan 17, 2010 8:17 pm
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Post Re: Nile for Phoenix Remedy
This bio is filled to the brim with so much s*** that I can't even read it.

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Mon Jan 18, 2010 1:50 am
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Post Re: Nile for Phoenix Remedy
Alright, I'm done here. :lock:
Mon Jan 18, 2010 10:25 am
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Post Re: Nile for Phoenix Remedy
Mystyr Nile wrote:
Alright, I'm done here. :lock:

No you're not, either take the critique, or get the f*** out of the section.

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Mon Jan 18, 2010 5:16 pm
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Post Re: Nile for Phoenix Remedy
Mystyr Nile wrote:
Name:Nile
EDIT: Name: Mystyr NileOK...
Age:15Child prodigy
Birthday: Feb 8 OK.
Talents: Mixed Martial ArtsOK
Appearance: angular face; buff ; 5 fingers per handNot much explanation here.
Height: 9'2'', 110'', 3.056yrds(2.794m)
Wingspan: 12'10'', 154'', 4.278yrds(3.912m)
Weight: 924lbs (419.12kg 66stone)
Body Mass Index(BMI): 52.8(2*average human BMI)
Race: Giant
Veteran: no, too youngAnd a child prodigy? Which is bad?
Backstory: Nile's village has been destroyed by a wildfire and he has been searching all over and around Varsk for any survivors of the fire, but to no avail. One day, Nile found a strange tunnel in a rip through the air. After a few seconds of staring at this tunnel, it sucked him into it, and he found himself in a mysterious Island(Phoenix). EDIT: The tunnel knocked him out on reentry. Definately not that explained either.
Gender:Male
And it's already accepted by WarPanda! Yeah, okay.


...No...And i'm being honest here. Take a look at my bio, and then yours.

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Mon Jan 18, 2010 6:29 pm
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Post Re: Nile for Phoenix Remedy
This will be my last post here, cya.:evil: :evil: :evil:
Tue Jan 19, 2010 5:11 pm
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Post Re: Nile for Phoenix Remedy
Okay, I see no description of hair at ALL here.


Seriously.

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Tue Jan 19, 2010 5:12 pm
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Post Re: Nile for Phoenix Remedy
I thought this topic was locked.

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Tue Jan 19, 2010 5:13 pm
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Post Re: Nile for Phoenix Remedy
Hakker unlocked it.

Apparently.

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Tue Jan 19, 2010 5:14 pm
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Post Re: Nile for Phoenix Remedy
Hakker called him a coward for not taking Critisism and went GTFO on him, and unlocked the topic for more.

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