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Dr.Rockso
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I wish you wouldn't post my WIPS. I have a sort've fixed version, but I don't bother uploading here. Now why don't you all move back to on topic, as in, Geno's sprites...
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Geno
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Currently Playing: Undertale
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I got your PM, thanks for explaining. I'll use your critique to make a better idle : D
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Gold
Joined: Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:10 am
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Location: Australia - Sydney
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Currently Playing: Ninja Gaiden III
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What about mine D:
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Geno
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Gold
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 | | | | |~DVDV~| wrote: I know I come under the category of someone who is not a "good spriter", but regarding Geno's Pit 1. The bow's positioning needs work. It shouldn't just go up and down with no rotation but have a bit of an arc (thus requiring a more complete Paletuna's Bow ring). The bow in the right arm is fine, just the left one needs work. Tied into this is the hand/bow's height. It's all over the place, jumping here, there and everywhere. compare the top point of it between each frame. A possible (and personally preferred improvement) would be to swap which hand holds the bow, using the 45 degree bow (which wouldn't have to rotate much, if at all) 2. The wings' shading fixing. I'd say the grey lines should be extended further down, near (if not touching) the wings. Overall, however, I'd say this is nothing major and I could in fact be completely wrong on this point. 3. The shape of the wings. Use a reference picture and you'll find they're very off. They're bigger, more curved and so forth, especially towards the bottom. 4. Shading overall: Nothing here, as far as I can tell, it's brilliant, good job 5. There are no rings around his arm unlike in Brawl. | | | | |
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| Fri Jun 18, 2010 7:52 pm |
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Geno
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| | | | |~DVDV~| wrote: | | | | |~DVDV~| wrote: I know I come under the category of someone who is not a "good spriter", but regarding Geno's Pit 1. The bow's positioning needs work. It shouldn't just go up and down with no rotation but have a bit of an arc (thus requiring a more complete Paletuna's Bow ring). The bow in the right arm is fine, just the left one needs work. Tied into this is the hand/bow's height. It's all over the place, jumping here, there and everywhere. compare the top point of it between each frame. A possible (and personally preferred improvement) would be to swap which hand holds the bow, using the 45 degree bow (which wouldn't have to rotate much, if at all) 2. The wings' shading fixing. I'd say the grey lines should be extended further down, near (if not touching) the wings. Overall, however, I'd say this is nothing major and I could in fact be completely wrong on this point. 3. The shape of the wings. Use a reference picture and you'll find they're very off. They're bigger, more curved and so forth, especially towards the bottom. 4. Shading overall: Nothing here, as far as I can tell, it's brilliant, good job 5. There are no rings around his arm unlike in Brawl. | | | | |
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Oh! Will do!
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| Fri Jun 18, 2010 7:56 pm |
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Super Duper
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And there something about his head seems to be pushed back to far.
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| Fri Jun 18, 2010 10:37 pm |
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Geno
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Updated OP.
Suggest styles please. I'll start with custom I guess.
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Alexander
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Geno
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Alexander
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Gold
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Location: Australia - Sydney
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Can we see an updated Pit?
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Chaosvii7
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Let's not and say we did.
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Geno
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Well, there was a big issue with Pit recently. I sprited at lead 70% of his animations, but then they all were saved as a GIF. not ANIMATED GIF. So I lost all of it. -_- Get out of my topic please no offence. I did custom, but it's horrid and i'm never doing custom again. Onto KSSU
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Suli
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:40 am Posts: 1505 Location: Los Angeles Country:
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Ocon or KHR style? :3
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