I tink he still a semi clone i want a new moveset

Screw it i tried making a interesting moveset, i'm not here to explain what clones/semi clones are and that making a moveset shouldn't just be difference, you need to think about how this plays out, how it can work, how it works compared to other fighters, and if making a moveset for a old vetern, how players of the old moveset would feel or how you can improve it.

Elsa Lets it go!


Source Game: Disney Frozen: Olaf's Quest(DSi/3DS), Disney Infinity(Wii U)

Description: Elsa is the crowned Queen of Arendelle. She discovered she had ice magic at a young age and was taught to conceal them so she could be normal. On the day of her coronation she accidentally revealed her powers and ran away. Learning to accept herself for who she is, with the help of her sister they return to Arendelle and live happily ever after.

Stats
Weight: 90
Height: Tall
Dash Speed: Slow
Initial Jump: Average
Midair Jump: Above Average
Fall Speed: Slow
Air Speed: Slow

Standard Attacks
Jab: Burst of Chill
Damage: 5%
Knockback: Low
Range: Medium
Description: Elsa thrusts her arm out. Similar to Zelda's Jab, except it's overall faster. It has a single hitbox and less range making it not as good for challenging rolls or approaches. Although it's better for Jab related combos and followups.

Forward Tilt: Icy Wind
Damage: 9%
Knockback: Low
Range: Long
Description: Despite sharing a similar animation to Elsa's Jab. Ftilt sports a much longer range comparable to that of Marth's or DK's ftilts. It has similar cooldown to those moves as well.

Up Tilt: Up Wind
Damage: 10%
Knockback: High
Range: Long
Description: Similar to Peach's Utilt, Elsa points towards the sky and causes an elegant wind of snow that damages enemies. Like her Jab and Ftilt it's also disjointed but can't be combo'd into easily. It also has a bit of start up. Still a good anti-air, can also kill at high percents (130%)

Down Tilt: Low Breeze
Damage: 7%
Knockback: Low
Range: Medium
Description: While sitting comfortably, Elsa creates an icy breeze on the ground infront of her. Similar range to Marth's dtilt but is much slower.

Dash Attack: Gone With the Wind
Damage: 10%
Knockback: Medium
Range: Mediun
Description: When dashing, Elsa will do an elegant leap forward. Causing a burst of icy wind infront of her. Decent for punishes or ending an air to ground combo.

Smash Attacks
Forward Smash: Snow Blast
Damage: 13%
Knockback: High
Range: Medium
Description: Similar to Rosalina's Fsmash from SSB4. Elsa will throw her arms out, realeasing a swirling blast of snow. An obvious kill move, killing around 110%. At full charges will not only launch opponents, but also freeze them as well.

Up Smash: Icicle Crash
Damage: 12%
Knockback: High
Range: Long
Description: Elsa creates a giant ice spike that rises from the ground behind her hurtbox. Bad horizontal range, but pretty long vertical disjoint. Kills at 120%

Down Smash: Freeze Shock
Damage: 11%
Knockback: None/Stops Momentum
Range: Medium
Description: Similar to ZSS' dsmash. Elsa points her hand towards the ground and creates a burst of frost. It freezes opponents on contact and stops them in their tracks.(Essentially a "freeze stun") If it hits an opponent who's in the air it'll cause them to fall downwards while frozen.

Aerials
Neutral Air: Snow Spin
Damage: 9% (4% 1st hit, 5% 2nd Hit)
Knockback: Low
Range: Short
Description: Elsa spins twice midair. The first hit pulls opponents in, the second hit has knockback. Very little to no cooldown and startup. Good for combos.

Forward Air: Snowflake Swipe
Damage: 11%
Knockback: Low
Range: Short
Description: Elsa uses both her hands to create a trail of snowflakes overhead and swipes downwards. A single hitting move similar to Luigi's forward air. Another good combo tool.

Back Air: Icicle Kick
Damage: 8% body, 12% legs & feet
Knockback: High
Range: Long
Description: Similar looking to Zelda's aerial kicks, Elsa's back air has two hitboxes. One on her waist and torso that does little horizontal knockback. While the stronger hitbox on her legs and feet deal good knockback. A long reaching aerial that can kill around 120%.

Up Air: Snowflake Halo
Damage: 10% early, 8% late
Knockback: Medium
Range: Long
Description: Similar to Rosalina's up aerial from SSB4, Elsa will cast a large rising snowflake over her head. Good for juggling and challenging falling aerials, bad for killing.

Down Air: Down Wind Snowflake
Damage: 10% early, 7% late
Knockback: Medium
Range: Long
Description: Similar to her up aerial, Elsa points downwards. Casting a falling snowflake. If you hit an opponent when the hitbox comes out, they'll be spiked. But if it hits late it'll pop them up with weak knockback.

Specials
Neutral Special: Icicle Spear
Damage: 6%-18%(6% per Ice Shard, 4 shards fully charged)
Knockback: Low-Medium
Range: Medium
Description: A charge-able special. Uncharged Elsa fires a single shard of ice. When fully charged Elsa will fire 4 Ice shards in a short burst, one after the other. The shards count as individual projectiles. Meaning if you powershield 1shard your shield will take damage from the rest. Though most true reflectors last long enough to reflect them all. Elsa can cancel the charge with a roll/spotdodge and store it.

Side Special: Do You Wanna Build a Snowman?
Damage: 5%
Knockback: Low
Range: Travels
Description: Elsa will create an Olaf snowman. The snowman walks across the stage, he rebounds from stage ledges but falls off of platforms. When coming into contact with the opponent the snowman will bump them into hitstun and crumble. The snowman will also crumble if attacked and can not be reflected. It will instead crumble on shields/powershields/reflectors. Snowman is a very important tool for Elsa's approach and trap game.

Up Special: Frozen Stairway
Damage: 14% (7% per hit)
Knockback: High
Range: Medium
Description: Similar to Squirtle's Waterfall from Brawl and PM. Elsa creates an ice stairway. The stairway continues to manifest as Elsa runs with it, the previous steps behind her quickly dissipate. Unlike most rising up specials this one can't be angled and rises pretty slow in comparison. The hitboxes have pretty high priority, and the travel distance is above average.
Visual Representation


Down Special: Ice Mirror
Knockback: Low
Range: Short
Description: Similar to Palutena's Reflect from SSB4, Elsa casts a glass-like Ice wall. It will reflect energy based projectiles with 1.5x the damage and knockback. It will also push away any opponent who runs into the mirror. Unlike Palutena's Reflector this push back effect is much stronger. It can also be Jump Canceled.

Grab & Throws
Grab: Cold Touch
Range: Average
Description: Elsa elegantly reaches for her opponent with one hand. As a cosmetic touch Elsa's grab also freezes the opponent. But they break out of freeze once they're thrown or grab released.

Pummel: Freeze Jolt
Damage: 3%
Description: Elsa causes an icy jolt on her frozen opponent.

Forward Throw: Breaking Ice
Damage: 13%
Knockback: High
Description: Elsa shatters her frozen opponent. Launching them with great force. High base knockback, but very low KBG.

Back Throw: Ice Throw
Damage: 10%
Knockback: High
Description: Elsa causes a strong gust of icy wind to lift and throw her frozen opponent behind her.

Up Throw: Ice Spike
Damage: 12%
Knockback: High
Description: Elsa creates an Ice spike from under her frozen opponent. Shattering them and launching them upwards.

Down Throw: Wind Lift
Damage: 11%
Knockback: High
Description: Elsa causes a chilling wind to lift her frozen opponent upwards, only to drop them straight to the ground. Like all of her other throws, down throw has High Knockback, but bad KBG. preventing it from killing until high percents.

Final Smash
Kingdom of Isolation
Damage: 30%
Knockback: High
Range: Long
Description: Elsa creates a large snowflake around her feet. She then constructs her Ice castle from the ground up. Killing opponents vertically. (50%+). The castle then shatters and the shards fall through the stage. Not dealing any damage.

.............. {Thought: I'm speechless}.............

elsa is the ssf2 sub zero

to: mage
1 if you think in the old school ganondorfd you will put the original foward special the disrespect hand
2 put customs moves don t work
3and think in the people who play brawl and saw a captain ganon and they want a king ok evil

I still can't understand you, sorry you already said your English was bad doesn't mean i can understand it.

Anyone wanna review my Elsa moveset?

Nope

Id do it, but I dont know anything about her. Would be kinda meh to review something I dont know, sorry

Been a long time since I suggested any characters, so I guess I'll come back in. Like what TCS said, I'd like to review more character lists its just that I don't usually recognize the characters. Just going through the list in the OP, I don't even recognize half of the names. Maybe what we should start doing is, for those who want to submit more than one or two characters (to give ppl just passing through some freebies) you should take the time to review a moveset every time you want to submit. Give back what you take, ya know?



So, since none of y'all are man enough to give feedback on a female Disney Ice Queen (/s), I'll help out Shine here and avoid the potential hypocrisy that my opening statement lends itself to.

-I like that you included palette swaps. Gives the post a greater sense of completeness. When I did my Galen Marek moveset, I tried to animate gifs of what each move would look like, but I'm bad and found it to be too much work.
-Like Zelda and Lucas, she has lots of disjointed hitboxes on her moves
-Haha, I like the dsmash
-So, with the uair/dair, should I imagine it looks just like Rosalina's but it is a snowflake instead of a halo? Man, I hate those moves and their huge hitboxes XD
-At what point can the Mirror be JC'd? I would assume if you do it too early the Mirror doesn't come out...

Definitely an unexpected character (but no more unexpected than Barbie lol), so I do appreciate the originality in the character choice as well as throughout the moveset (even if the ideas for the moves are inspired by moves from smash. After all, there's only so much one can do). The freeze mechanic is neat tho, I think that the character could go further with it but then she might become ZSS without a tether lel.

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Now, onto a totally original character that required great concentration and lots of thought to overcome the difficulty of coming up with a moveset.

Doctor Doom

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Source: Numerous games across numerous platforms, but I'll just go with Marvel: Ultimate Alliance for the Nintendo Wii.

Dr. Doom is a heavyweight, aerial-combat-zoning tank that zones a bit before getting a good combo. His main weakness is his weight causing him to be more easily comboed due to being closer for followups, but it also causes him to take less hitstun and avoid being put into knockdown. Another weakness is that he doesn't have many quick moves, which forces him to jump around and zone before being able to do much. He is also a large target. His moveset is inspired by his UMvC3 appearance, but some moves come from other parts of his character.

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EDIT1:UPDATE! specials and miscellaneous added!
EDIT2:UPDATE!Ground standards added and miscellaneous finished!
EDIT3:UPDATE!Aeriels finished, dash attack added, and completely done!

Not a bad idea, though like you said, you barely knew half of the summited works{I'm pretty sure only like 1 of mine are even remotely known here} Though i'm sure this would make production and activity more encouraging here.



I think it's good that more female and/or disney characters are being suggested, i just HATE frozen, i don't think ppl with a - biased towards a certain series/character should review it since mostly likely they will be harsher and more unfair in judging, myself included.

The Review

Size: - Fair size, he is 6'2 after all.
Weight - I'd imagine having that armor would weigh something.
Fall Speed. - This is a nice fall speed to go with.

Jab - A ganondorf jab, strong but not good for combos, interesting.

f-tilt - Like the above he seems to have some anti-air potential though he might need to relay on other moves for most ground to ground combat.

D-Tilt - Good juggler started, and would visually look cool.

Up Smash - Very interesting, seems like a good punisher for those trying to attack from behind as well.

Aerials - Overall reminds me of a mix between mewtwo and lucas with some ganon mix in the b and d air.

N-Spec - Interesting and usefull move, personally i would of gone with a projectile shield, maybe thats too basic.

S-Spec - I like it more then i should really, but for doom i think he has enough types of projectiles to do something else, if out of ideas read about him in marvel or play other games he has been in to get more ideas{That what i did for chocobo moveset, i did some research on the japanese only games and replayed my copy of chocobo tales.}

D-Spec - I'm thinking of that divekick game for some reason, it looks like a good move to use, though imo i would swap places of current S and D spec, though thats just me.

U-Spec - I was thinking maybe make it like brawl pit's up-spec but i'm not sure if that type of aerial movement is frown upon here.

Final Smash - I would of gone with the infinity gauntlets but this can also work.

Some revisions:
Dash Attack: A running Slash (again; PKMN Red/Blue)

Grab REDUX! :
Type: No tether, ONE Hand
Pummel: Pound (PKMN Red/Blue)

Added stuff:
Idle: Checks claws, similar to Weavile's in Pokemon X & Y/Omega Ruby & Alpha Sapphire

Taunts:
Up & Down- Tosses a (fake) Time Gear up and catches it while posing
Side- Turns into a substitute doll for half a second, then turns back
Neutral- All lights dim around Grovyle and lighting flashes, reminiscent of his first appearance in Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time, Sky, Darkness

Victory Theme: An excerpt from "Dialga's Fight to the Finish!" from Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time ( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nxS8YDjTpeg ) Remixed
Victory Pose: Crosses his arms then suddenly moves them apart, revealing a (fake) Time Gear, and posing while smirking
Defeat: Lucario's clap from the main games

The following will use values from Super Smash Flash 2 for reference:
Weight: (using SSF2, which puts Mario at 100) 89, slightly lighter than
Dash/Run Speed: (Which puts Mario at 10) 11.3, slightly slower than
Fall Speed:
Normal- (Mario: 13) 11.8, slight faster than
Fast- (Mario: 16) 15, tied with
Jump, No Mario stats for this one:
Normal- Above Average
Short- (in terms of lowness to the ground) Above Average
Running Start- Great

Jab Resetting moves: Jab 1, Jab 2, Low Sweep (DTilt; >20%), False Swipe (STilt), NAir (Falling, hard to land), First hits of Leaf Storm (which really doesn't matter that much)

UPDATE! Please pay attention to me...