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poketoon's pokemon mystery dungeon adventure 
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Joined: Thu Jan 15, 2009 6:35 pm
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Location: Somewhere in Hoenn
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Sorry, been too busy with school stuff (School is about to be over in case you don't know)
Story cont.

Juwles: I can sence more pokemon along the way.
Linus: Then what are you waiting for. Let's go.
Juwles: You go the other way while I'll go towards them. You can launch a sneak attack.
(Ashley grabbed Linus' arm and ran.)
Linus: Hey! Let me go
Ashley: We need to hurry.
(Ashley let go of Linus. Linus falls and hit a can. The can rolled into a building and Linus heard a crash inside the building.)
Ashley: Hey! Where are you going?
Linus: I need to see what happened inside that building.
Ashley: DON'T GO INSIDE THERE!
(Linus sees Ashley and a Pidgeot tied up. Linus got confused and he turns around.)
Ditto: So you finally figured out the secret. I'm actually a Ditto.
(Linus used Thunder Wave but since Ditto's body are rubber, it didn't do any damage. So Linus ran outside.)
Ditto: You think you can outrun me?!
(Ditto was heading out the door, but Juwles got in the way and Ditto ran over Juwles. Ditto transformed into a Rilou and Linus used Thunder Wave.)
Linus: Is that what you mean about being smarter, Juwles?
Juwles: Uhhh...
(Linus traps Ditto into a barrel. Then some kind of a red beam went inside the barrel. Linus looks up to a roof of the building and see a shadow.)
Linus: What is that up there?
(The shadow fled. Linus looks inside the barrel and the Ditto was gone.)
Juwles: Linus, untie Ashley and the Mayor. I'll check on everyone else.
(Linus went inside the building. Juwles got a leaf and played a song. A Spearow came.)
Juwles: Tell my master that he passed the first test.

To be cont.

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Mon May 25, 2009 6:59 pm
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Location: Somewhere in Hoenn
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There is going to be a new item and attack (I made up) that will appear in my story. (there may be more new items and attack so I'll tell you that later)

Pokeskin: A device that you attach to any kind of pokeball and convert to a different type (depending on what type of pokeskin it is)
for example I have a great ball and a timer skin. If I attach the timer skin to the great ball, The great ball will now be a timer ball.

In the story, there will be shadow pokemon too. I made up a shadow move
Shadow Fang: a shadow move that can be fatal to the one who got attacked by this move if they aren't cured. Shadow Fang releases a shadow poison that slowly eats the life of the one who got bitten by the move. So far, only the Orre Region has the cure for it.

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Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:09 pm
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Since post counts doesn't go up here, I think it's safe to post another story

(Linus unties the the mayor and Ashley. Then Ashley gives a big hug to Linus.)
Ashley: Thanks for saving us, You truely are rescue team.
(Linus stood still like he got paralyzed)
Juwles: We aren't rescue team. We're just travelers
Ashley: But strong and brave travelers.
(Juwles sigh, and then he looks at Linus who is just standing there having his mind lost in space)
Juwles: Linus?
(Juwles was waving his hand and snapping his fingers but Linus didn't even move)
Mayor: You must be tired. Would you like to stay here for the night?
Juwles: By looking at Linus right now, I think he needs a long rest.
(Ashley looks at Linus. Linus still wasn't moving. Ashley grabed her tail and her tail touched Linus' tail to create a spark. Linus jumps out all shocked and yelled)
Linus: Who shocked me?
Ashley: Now you woken up. Why didn't you answered?
Linus: (blushing) I-I um... W-Well you see I...
Ashley: What. You didn't think that giving you a hug made your mind lost in space, wouldn't it?
Linus: N-No.
Juwles: Why are you blushing now?
(Linus pinned Juwles against the wall.)
Juwles:Alright I get it.
Linus: Hey how did you drove off the Pokemon that are endangering the city?
Juwles: I fought them and they got scared so they ran.


(but that didn't really happen. Flashback on the next part.)

EDIT: I'm having second thoughts about the flashback idea so I'm skipping that for now

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Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:35 pm
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Waifu: Juandisimo Magnifico
Right now Austin and Dark Fire are in the Southern Grasslands searching for Ellys, who went off last night to train, but never returned. They hear shuffling of the grass...
Image Austin: Ellys? Are you there?
Image Dark Fire: Something isn't right, there is a different presence...

At that moment, an Espeon comes out of the grass ready to attack.

Image Espeon: Who are you?
Image Austin: Why should we say...
Image Dark Fire: Wait, she doesn't seem bad...I am Dark Fire, part of Team BlackThunder, and this is our leader, Austin...
Image Espeon: Isn't two pokemon too small for a team...
Image Austin: We are looking for our missing partner, she's-
Image Espeon: An Absol?
Image Dark Fire: How did you know...
Image Espeon: Look, there is an underground volcano here, and last night my brother, an Umbreon, saw something a team of pokemon carrying an Absol into the entrance to the volcano. He only saw a Garchomp and a Metagross, there was one more, but he couldn't see what it was...
Image Dark Fire: Well, looks like that's Ellys...Can you show us the entrance?
Image Espeon: As long as I can come with. I am part of the Eevee siblings, and my sister Glaceon was also brought in there last night also, she went off to try and master the Blizzard she just learned, but they brought her into the volcano too. That's how my brother Umbreon saw them taking Ellys. And knowing my sister, she won't be able to withstand the heat for too long...
Image Austin: Sounds fair.

They then head to the entrance to Moonshadow Volcano, ready for anything...
To be Continued...


Mon Jun 15, 2009 7:28 pm
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pokemon: Blaziken
name: Garland
gender: Male
side(hero or villan): Villain
personality: Loves fighting, and is very cold-hearted despite being Fire-type. He'll stop at nothing to see his plans through to the end.

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Tue Jun 16, 2009 5:56 pm
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Waifu: Juandisimo Magnifico
One trip through a large 99 floor volcano later.
Image Austin: Wow, that was difficult...
Image Dark Fire: Even for me that was hard...
Image Espeon: That was just the first level, we still have 9 more 99-floor levels to go.
Image Austin: Screw this...Dark Fire, you must have a way to get us through.
Image Dark Fire: I have it! I can summon the power of my brothers Dialga and Palkia to rip apart a hole that we can travel down to the bottom.
Image Espeon: Ok, summon them please so we can get down and rescue Ellys and Glaceon.
Image Dark Fire: Dialga! Palkia! I need your assistance!

All of a sudden, two swirling tornadoes of energy, one pink and one light blue, come, and Dark Fire becomes a Purple tornado, and the 3 destroy the ground, making a hole go 891 floors down, and a spiral staircase of light appears leading down.

Image Espeon: Oh my...
Image Austin: Wow...
Dark Fire in Austin's head: I'll be waiting at the bottom.


Tue Jun 16, 2009 6:19 pm
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((Ugh. Where's Poketoon?))

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Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:43 am
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FFExdeath wrote:
((Ugh. Where's Poketoon?))

Wherever he wants to be!

I have to go without pictures for now, but I have some new characters.

Pokemon: Garchomp
Name: Blade
Side: ???
Personality: A bit of a hothead, he likes to jump to conclusions before thinking about it.

Pokemon: Metagross
Name: Meteo
Side: ???
Personality: Meteo is the opposite of Blade, a very calm individual who thinks things out before taking action.

Pokemon: Flygon
Name: Draco
Side: ???
Personality: An adventurous pokemon, and sometimes slightly arrogant, but he has a very determined spirit.

Pokemon: Entei
Name: Entei
Side: ???
Personality: Part of the legendary trio of beasts, Entei is arrogant. Entei is a bit of a hothead, but he tries not to be without success.

Pokemon: Suicune
Name: Suicune
Side: ???
Personality: The second of the legendary trio of beasts, Suicune is the calm one,he has to make sure Entei isn't being a bully almost all the time, but he never really has to worry about his brother Raikou.

Pokemon: Raikou
Name: Raikou
Personality: The last member of the legendary trio of beasts, Raikou is a quiet pokemon. He only speaks when needed, but he rarely appears, only when one of his brothers is in trouble. He is considered the most powerful of the beast trio.


Thu Jun 18, 2009 3:46 pm
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FFExdeath wrote:
((Ugh. Where's Poketoon?))

I'm sure Poketoon wouldn't mind if you start now.

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Thu Jun 18, 2009 5:23 pm
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Sorry that I haven't been around alot. I was busy playing Sonic Unleashed. I post my next part when it's finished.

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Fri Jun 19, 2009 9:12 am
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((I guess I'll start my story now))

Garland: Perfect, just perfect! Those pathetic rescue teams are moving along their own happy business, unaware of their true enemy! This is all too easy.
???: Yes it is, master.
Garland: To think that, while they're out "saving" Pokemon, the real problem is catching them by surprise, right under their nose. Soon, all of Sinnoh and beyond will belong to yours truly!
???: It is indeed most impressive, sir.
Garland: I know. Now, Mateus, could you go find new recruits?
??? (Mateus): Yes, sire.

pokemon: Alakazam
name: Mateus
gender: Male
side(hero or villan): Villain
personality: Mateus is unfailingly loyal to Garland, and will do whatever he says. He also seems oblivious to the fact that Psychic-ypes beat Fighting-types.

((I know this is short, but it's only the first chapter of my story.))

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Fri Jun 19, 2009 2:21 pm
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(scene opens with Mateus in a forest)
Mateus: Oh, bother! Garland sent me out to find new recruits, but I can't find anyone anywhere!
???: New recruits? For what?
Mateus: Who said that?
???: Up here!
Mateus: *looks up in tree and sees a Swellow* Oh, well, how would you like to help my master Garland to dominate all of Sinnoh? You'll get your share fo rewards, too!
Swellow: Sounds interesting. What exactly is in it for me?
Mateus: Great wealth and power beyond your wildest dreams! You'll be able to dine on only the rarest of Berries. I just had a couple Starf Berries myself.
Swellow: I'm in! *flies down* Name's Bullseye. Don't you forget it!
Mateus: I'm an Alakazam. I don't forget.

pokemon: Swellow
name: Bullseye
gender: Female
side(hero or villan): Apparently villain
personality: She's a little energetic and eager for power. That is the reason she joined Garland's cause.

((Fun fact: Bullseye is the name of my Swellow in Pokemon Emerald))

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Sun Jun 28, 2009 11:11 am
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My story cont.

(Linus looks around. He doesn't know where he is at. A trainer spotted him)
Trainer: Hey, a Minun. I would have a perfect team if I can catch it.
(The trainer sent out his pokemon. It's Linus' sister)
Linus: Sara. What happened?
Sara: Sorry brother. I got captured. I have to follow his command.
Trainer: Use Shock Wave.
Sara: Forgive me.
(Right when Sara attacked Linus, Linus hit his face on a wall and wakes up. He looks around and he sees that he is held captive.)
Linus: What the...? How did I get here?
Ditto: Look. He just waked up.
(There are 2 Dittos and one of them was from last time.)
Ditto: Now you stay here and we’ll take the deed to the town.
(The 2 Dittos left. Linus is trying to figure out how to get out. He looks around and finds of what it looks like a fuse box. Linus thinks that if he hits the fuse box, the bars will open. He uses thunder wave but nothing happened.)
Linus: I need to hit it harder. But that’s all I can do.
(The door opened. Linus checks who was coming. It is a Pikachu, a Squirtle, a Charmander, and a Bulbasaur.)
Linus: Who are you?
Pikachu: We are the rescue team. Team Trainers. We can unlock the bars. Let’s find the key.
Linus: I’d rather be stuck here forever than you three rescuing me.
Pikachu: Why?
Linus: Why does it matter to you?
Pikachu: Because you are held captive in here and you don’t want to be rescued? How does that make sense?
Linus: Shut up!
(Linus used shock wave all over the place. It damaged the bars and the box. Something fell out of the box.)
Linus: I’m free. Finally.
Charmander: What are those things that fell off the fuse box?
Linus: That’s not a fuse box.
(Pikachu picked up the items that fell off the box)
Linus: That’s a…
Pikachu: Pokeball.


To be continued

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Thu Jul 16, 2009 6:18 pm
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Continuing my story...
Austin: That staircase will take a while to get down...
Espeon: ...Jump?
Austin: Yes

Austin and Espeon jumped, but were lucky enough to land on Dark Fire at the bottom. Dark Fire was just staring at a glimmering stone stuck in the wall...

Austin: Dark Fire? What is it?
Dark Fire: This stone, it's radiating the power from my world...
Espeon: Let's get it out of the wall and look at it.

Austin and Espeon use attacks to break the rock loose, but it goes flying straight towards Dark Fire. It hits him right in the forehead, but it merges with him, and he starts glowing...

Dark Fire: Wait! I know this! It's the Griseous Orb!

Dark Fire then transforms into his Origin Forme.

Austin: Wow...that's your true form?
Dark Fire: Yes, back when I lived in the Distortion World, I was able to remain in this form, but when I exited to find you and Ellys, I changed into my Altered Forme. But with the Griseous Orb, I can enter Origin Forme wherever I want.
Espeon: Well then...we need to go 3 floors deeper into the Volcano to reach the pit, where they took Ellys and Glaceon.
Austin: Let's go.

3 floors later...

Espeon: There! That's the team that took Ellys and Glaceon!
Meteo: Hm? Who are you?
Austin: We are team BlackThunder, and you took our partner Ellys, an Absol.
Meteo: Oh, so you are the friend that she was talking about. I can ta-

All of a sudden, Blade, a Garchomp, emerges from the ground and heads straight for Austin.

Blade: I will destroy you!

Then Dark Fire gets in the way and uses Aura Sphere to stop Blade.

Meteo: Blade...what am I going to do with you...
Blade: Uhhhn......
Dark Fire: Is he your partner?
Meteo: Unfortunately, yes...

Then Draco, a Flygon, comes out of the hole that Blade was in.

Draco: What's with the noise? I was trying to rest...
Meteo: Draco, take these pokemon to go see the Absol that we found.
Draco: Ok, come wi-
Espeon: Wait! Didn't you also find a Glaceon?
Meteo: Oh...the Glaceon...
Espeon: WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER?!?!
Draco: Nothing! WE didn't do anything, but recently, a 12th level of the volcano opened up, it's about 10 floors deep, but at the bottom is Entei, one of the Legendary Trio of Beasts...
Meteo: When we brought back Glaceon and Ellys, Entei was in our chamber, and he took Glaceon down to his chamber...we tried to stop him, but he just ended up damaging Draco badly, so we had no choice but to let him take Glaceon...
Espeon: We need Glaceon back! Come on, guys, we need to go down and take care of that Entei!
Draco: Wait, I have a score to settle with that Entei, let me come with.
Dark Fire: I suppose that's fine.
Austin: Yeah, that's fine. Now let's go.

Then a large blast of lava comes up from the pit of lava at the bottom of the chamber, and a voice is heard.

???: Stop!
Dark Fire: If this is an enemy, let me take care of it, I need to practice with my Origin Forme.
???: If you wish to attack Entei, you will have to go through me first...

The lava is dispelled and a Moltres is revealed.

Dark Fire: Good, a challenge...

To be continued.

Pokemon: Moltres
Name: Moltres
Side: ???
Personality: Unknown. The Legendary Birds live with the Legendary Beasts, but they are one rank lower in power, so they protect the Beasts.


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Pokemon: Alakazam
Name: Anthony
Side: Hero
Personality: Funny and powerful,but is lazy and doesn't fight too much.

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