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my video game sprites (kirby n' Mario n' stuffiez)
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 Joined: Sat Mar 17, 2012 5:45 pm Posts: 71 Gender: Male Currently Playing: paper mario sticker star 
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Its mario, alright?
 mishapen, badly shaded goomba  kirby n tomatoes  these were made using sploder. (the game creator site) also there is the stuff in my signature\/ Last edited by ssf2fan349 on Tue Jul 30, 2013 7:50 pm, edited 3 times in total. |
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The style is interesting in a way
Your lineart is the only thing that needs work. And your shading too, if it's even supposed to be shaded. _________________  |
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| Tue Jul 30, 2013 2:49 pm |
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Joined: Sat Mar 17, 2012 5:45 pm Posts: 71 Gender: Male Currently Playing: paper mario sticker star
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Thanks! Im horrible at shading so I didnt do it for most of them but I'll try
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| Tue Jul 30, 2013 2:54 pm |
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Joined: Sat Mar 17, 2012 5:45 pm Posts: 71 Gender: Male Currently Playing: paper mario sticker star
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 It's not really noticable, but I shaded it. (I did this in like 2 minutes) |
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| Tue Jul 30, 2013 3:13 pm |
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Brotip: Making Titles like that only makes people less interested in helping you. Treat your own work with at least a bit of dignity.
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| Tue Jul 30, 2013 3:21 pm |
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^This, and come on dude, they're not THAT BAD. I kinda made worse things.
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| Tue Jul 30, 2013 3:25 pm |
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You show potential.
You should outline the drawings. Also, mario's hands should be shaped. If you are willing to take critism, and want to take your art to the next level, add more detail! Like this:  Don't resize your sprite either, it can ruin more edits and critism. (BTW, I don't know if your using MS Paint, but try out Paint.Net) |
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| Tue Jul 30, 2013 4:36 pm |
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Joined: Wed Oct 05, 2011 3:39 pm Posts: 223 Location: The world. Gender: Male Skype: KrayKrayDabouken Currently Playing: Something I enjoy.
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^ That isn't much better at all.
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| Tue Jul 30, 2013 6:20 pm |
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Lol, I realized when I posted it. |
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| Tue Jul 30, 2013 6:37 pm |
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Site Moderator  Joined: Fri May 22, 2009 3:44 pm Posts: 4156 Location: saying things with posed looks Gender: Anime Girl Skype: Snail's Legacy Currently Playing: umib and unib Waifu: SNAIL
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your sprites look like they could be used for a fun looking 8 bit game
i've seen good games that use sprites similar to this without outlines so if you're going for that type of style, it's pretty good _________________     early 2k nostalgia mode |
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| Tue Jul 30, 2013 7:09 pm |
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Like Cave Story? That game was a masterpiece. _________________ |
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| Tue Jul 30, 2013 7:39 pm |
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Site Moderator Joined: Fri May 22, 2009 3:44 pm Posts: 4156 Location: saying things with posed looks Gender: Anime Girl Skype: Snail's Legacy Currently Playing: umib and unib Waifu: SNAIL
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ooh i wasn't even thinking about cave story but yeah sorta like cave story there was also this game called dino run that was pretty fun and nice looking a few years ago _________________ early 2k nostalgia mode |
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| Tue Jul 30, 2013 7:43 pm |
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Joined: Sat Mar 17, 2012 5:45 pm Posts: 71 Gender: Male Currently Playing: paper mario sticker star
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I (think I) changed the Title Heres the outlined one (with a few changes)  Heres Kirby (I didnt do an outline and you can just barely see the shading)  poor, poor, goomba, he's not getting any love  |
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| Tue Jul 30, 2013 7:48 pm |
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