Ah screw it, can't think of anything good so don't expect anything.

I don't know if this counts as bumping or not... If it is, then sorry. Oh and late entry, sorry.

Name: Drake Layton

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Faction: Castle Knights

Personality: Drake is jokingly sarcastic. He is also quite intelligent, mind you. There is a particular atmosphere around him that people thought he'll be a good ally; a friend. He does not show kindness directly, but through small actions, as even he have pride too. Drake is not the type to lead a group, so he pushes the role to another if he was given that particular role. Should he be given a job, he will do it with determination. Drake is also quite optimistic.

Appearance: Drake is shorter than most men, and he's certainly lighter than the average person. Drake wears a piece of morrigan vest clothing(Lol hint:Google),with his hood exposing his eyes, which are blue in color.(Quite similar to the robe that the Organization uses back in the days) The hood has a mask which covers his mouth, but people can understand him quite well, despite the mask. He wears dark blue cargo pants, and completing the set is a pair of running shoes.

Bio: Drake was taken in by an old lady, after his parents died, during a battle. At that time, he was only a 14 of age. At the academy, his teacher paired him with various people, and sent them to a virtual world. The teacher then found out he had the talent for reconnaissance missions, because the teacher was quite surprised when the information that had been gathered was much more than what the teacher had expected. Drake was then accepted into the castle knights. Drake joined the castle knights only because he wanted to surpass his own skills, and not for revenge, as it was a for a different reason that his parents had died.

Weapon of choice: Drake's weapon was a simple shortsword. It has no special features, though the steel scabbard was attach to a strap, which Drake could wear it on his back.(...Okay, unnatural explanation. I really have no idea how to explain.)

Considering writing a short bio for every NPC/world as they're introduced/updated, sort of like a journal in most RPGs. Also working on the first post a bit in my free time. Still scared s*** that I might've forgotten something important.No.

Wasn't really expecting anything ;_;

Well he just said your bio was bad. Work on that and you might get in : D

Better than most (I mean in general), but still not good.

Oh yeah, it's got potential, don't be discouraged, but... Well, let's see. Your grammar is lacking, bad use of "have" or mistaking past and present tense, but nothing major. Then we get to the bio... What battle? Who's fighting who? Where, a village or a city? Why did his parents die? Did they fight in the battle? Were they innocent civilians caught in the crossfire? Your bio is filled with things like that, it really makes it feel lacking with info.

Ok, so everyone is approved.

BTW, how many characters are there going to be? (just askin')

hi i am here just to tell you that you should stop assuming things

n-nini! you don't have to write fifty paragraphs just for one bio!

Keep dreaming.

Here's my bio.

Name:Travis Hanabi

Gender: Male

Age: 26

Faction: Organization

Personality: Travis is hard-headed and barely thinks anything through. Although he occasionally jokes around, on the battle field he is always dead serious. He craves power and glory at any price and is willing to make almost and sacrifice to obtain them. Travis grew up with two older and wiser siblings who has always looked down at him, because of this Travis is always jumping at the chance to prove himself worthy and usefull no matter what the situation is.

Appearance: Travis has short red (kinda crimsion colored) spikey hair that points in three different directions up, left and right. His eye color is a eerie shade of purple. He is 5ft and 10inch. He is always wearing his faviorite black and red vest and under it is a white. long sleeve shirt with dark blue and yellow stripes going across the center from the shoulder of the shirt. Travis wears dark brown fingerless gloves. Travis lower body consist of a plain black pants and dark green shoes.

Bio: Travis has grown in the shadow of two older and wiser siblings so he thinks that by joining this war he can gain some respect from his siblings. Travis also joins the war in order to achieve power and glory, he also hopes that in the the process of participating in this war people will be aware of just how powerful he is (or how powerful he thinks he is).

Weapon of choice: Dual swords that were crafted by his older sibling. One of the blades have a hidden mechanism that can fire a dagger (only one). The other sword however has a hidden mechanism at the tip of the blade that allows the tip to extend 5inches for a little more range.

nobodies dont have families...

Awful grammar, lacking knowledge of the source material intertwined with the very cliché "revenge" BS. Also, overload on swords and anime hairstyle. You should be castrated for this travesty.

Aw well I'll have to think of something when I edit my post.
EDIT: O.K I edited my bio. I fixed pretty much everything in my bio. The only thing that I have not fixed is my grammar. Tell me if there's anything still wrong with it.