i wasn't bashing you. i was trying to help? well anyways, it's just bad. can you please get back to the drawing board?

This is helpful?

....oh sorry, i forgot about that. well,

1. the arms are badly shaded and the arm is totally deformed, try make it a diffrent way or re shade it.
2. the shirt is bad. the colors are not matching and the body muscles are badly sprited.
3. the pants and shoes need more work, and the arm needs a better shape.
4. re make it. or stick with your old one.

That much better, thank you.

Well, basically, you seem to think of this as horrible, so I'll try to fix it.
Really??? I thought they were kinda good? Oh well.

More Rick!!!

nice!

i'll edit foxx sometime to make him look better.

My New Rick:

It's still a WIP. The middle-frame arm is especially bad.
But I think it's pretty good, despite its bad spots.

Dots:
Stage 1:


Stage 2:


Hair needs improvement, obviously.

you should shade the axe differently.

Yeah, I'm gonna do that now.

Some new hair:

I might just get rid of the whole ponytail, but I'm not sure yet.

New Axe shading:

I think it looks pretty good.

More Rick. Fix'd all things I noticed.

I guess this is gonna be my new project; Kirby's Main Helpers.

Warning: The following contains terrible explaining

Since I'm eventually going to get Flash, mostly likely by the end of August, no doubt by end of the year, I guess my first Project will be a series of Kirby stuff. I've got my style now, some more stuff that I'll explain eventually, but for now, here's some Pitch for you.

Cool bird is cool.

Thanx.

Here's a comparison, and New Rick (new outline/eye color).

*wonders if I should make Rick at same angle as Pitch*

And I'm working on a Coo sprite right now.

Coo! lolz, forgot to do feet.