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Nintendo95
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Made Ice Climbers...
_________________- ̗̀My Pikachu will show you the fastest way DOWN! ̖́-competitive ssf2 ruined ssf2..
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Mon Jan 05, 2015 9:52 am |
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Living Shadow
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:43 am Posts: 641
Gender: Male
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Your lineart is fantastic, and I think it would really benefit you to study some shading techniques to really take your sprites to the next level. Zooming in, I see you've started a little bit of anti-aliasing in certain paths. Keep on that path. Try rounding out your shading a little bit, feels too jagged and unnatural. Also, I'd take out the lightest shade of blue, it adds a little too much shine to a fabric that shouldn't be shiny.
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Mon Jan 05, 2015 3:54 pm |
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TheRealHeroOfWinds
Joined: Thu Dec 23, 2010 12:16 pm Posts: 1583 Country:
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You need to start paying attention to user criticism, or it'll ruin you as a spriter.
It's how other spriters gave up on this forum.
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Mon Jan 05, 2015 4:25 pm |
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Nintendo95
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Made Latias...
_________________- ̗̀My Pikachu will show you the fastest way DOWN! ̖́-competitive ssf2 ruined ssf2..
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Sat Jan 10, 2015 1:25 pm |
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Lisnovski
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Currently Playing: Super Smash Flash 2 Beta
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Dude, I don't give up that easily. Keep it Up, I would like to see Arceus.
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Sat Jan 10, 2015 2:13 pm |
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DettaDoodle
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:18 am Posts: 899 Location: drowning in pixels and waifus
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think you could benefit overall by using more vibrant colors as people have said in the past, the colors you tend to use look more metallic
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Sat Jan 10, 2015 2:31 pm |
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Living Shadow
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:43 am Posts: 641
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Latias looks great, I love how you shaded the wing facing us.
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Sun Jan 11, 2015 2:33 pm |
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Nintendo95
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Made Fennekin again...
_________________- ̗̀My Pikachu will show you the fastest way DOWN! ̖́-competitive ssf2 ruined ssf2..
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Mon Jan 12, 2015 11:50 am |
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Nintendo95
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Made Fennekin...
_________________- ̗̀My Pikachu will show you the fastest way DOWN! ̖́-competitive ssf2 ruined ssf2..
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Fri Jan 16, 2015 12:55 pm |
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Lisnovski
Joined: Wed Oct 15, 2014 8:03 pm Posts: 882 Country:
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His head grows in the first frames, Can you fix it?
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Fri Jan 16, 2015 1:19 pm |
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TacThree
Joined: Sat Oct 01, 2011 2:28 am Posts: 2796 Location: Los Angeles & San Luis Obispo, California Country:
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Fennekin looks adorable :0 I love how smooth the animation is compared to animations you've made in the past. Very nice improvement there m8
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Fri Jan 16, 2015 1:20 pm |
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Zero Insanity
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:37 am Posts: 2315 Location: Over There Country:
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That looks so cute, I love it. The animation is pretty fluid which is great. Nice work!
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Fri Jan 16, 2015 6:30 pm |
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Sazh
Joined: Sat Apr 16, 2011 7:39 pm Posts: 1451 Location: Enjoying Life Country:
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Currently Playing: League of Legends, Killing Floor 2, Overwatch
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Really digging that avatar ZI. I've always liked that custom sprite for some reason xD On topic: I think you should add a few more frames to your animations.
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Fri Jan 16, 2015 7:48 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
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I think it has enough frames already Good work
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Fri Jan 16, 2015 8:10 pm |
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Sazh
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The sprite itself is divine. The animation just looks a little fast and skippy to me.
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Fri Jan 16, 2015 9:19 pm |
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