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Zane Kura 
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Joined: Mon Jun 07, 2010 10:22 pm
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ill try my best....tommorrow its like 2:00am here

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Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:05 am
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Hollow King wrote:
what do you suggest

I suggest you completely re plan your personality.

I will give you one more example.
Spoilers I guess but none of you will probably ever see Zeorymer, especially you HK, because you only seem to like mainstream anime from today and not obscure 80s mecha shows.
spoilers and split personality example woohoo: show
In Zeorymer, Masato seemingly has two personalities, his normal naive demeanor, and a homicidal demeanor. The TRIGGER for his personality to switch is when he pilots Zeorymer, which unlocks the personality and memories of Masaki, the man who created him and Zeorymer.
Masato is a clone of Masaki, genetically engineered to be completely rewritten as Masaki when he comes of age and pilots Zeorymer. However, Masaki's personality cannot take full control outside of piloting, and thus Masato's personality still lives when he is not piloting. (except for one instance, but Masato snaps out of Masaki mode after killing 3 of the Hau Dragons at once, and he actually ends up in the middle, and no longer is Masato nor Masaki.)

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Whimzer wrote:
On that "Split Personality."

Something like that is HARD to pull off successfully, otherwise it looks cheap and seems as if no effort went into either of the character's personalities. A split personality consists of two constant emotions that plague a person; it is not at will. You cannot go from calm to RAAAAAAGE in a split second and call it a split personality. A split personality is somewhat like being bi-polar. There is often a trigger to such a reaction.

Most people with split personalities aren't even aware of their "other side".

Listen, I would recommend trying a much more simple character for your first bio, like a simple swordsman. This will help us identify where you need improvement and you will learn much more.

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