The right arm of the blue power suit space warrior chick isn't right

The faces both ways in different pictures.

So that doesn't help much. be more spiffy :D

Her right arm is too short useless she was born with uneven arms. Just make it equal to the left arm

It looks that way because the slant of body.

because, if you notice her head is leaning more forward, makes the back slouched, and i make the shoulders lean on one side.

But, I need to make her(our left) bigger by 3px. other than that. Its not that short.

Also-
More fun stuff with this whore type character.
(will sprite this once I finish it up in flash.)

Taken a likin' to the Skullgirls style, haven't you? You sly little devil you.

YEa, this is one was the first trying to get the style done correctly.
the others are much better

Woah there
don't get too carried away lol

its... somthing

I think her left leg is too low/long. Because if it were to be in that position, the hips would have to be slanted, but the torso doesn't indicate that.

Looks pretty neat though. Elbows/knees are a little too thin for my liking but yeah, it's neat.

Oh, light source is inconsistent on the hair. Pony tail has it coming ever so slightly from the right but on the main part the angle is more pronounced.

well since her hand is in the way of the leg, it looks longer then is supposed to.

The hair, I still need to practice on, it not really because its the shading(well yes in a way) I just tried a texture type... you know how hair goes thinner... well its ment to be like it transparent. but yea, I need to practice hair.


Excuse me... I know your trying to help and all... but could you give me an idea on how to fix instead of pointing whats wrong? :D

that would be super helpful.

Oh! Sorry, guess I wasn't communicating everything I was thinking.

Just do the opposite of everything I said. Make HER left leg ('specially the thigh) shorter, (Might have to lift the foot up a few pixels too. Dunno, try it out)
Decide on a light source and stick to it (I'm assuming it's top right 45 degrees, towards the front?) then adjust all the parts to fit. Examples would be HER right shoulder, the pony tail and HER right thigh to an extent.

I like HER right foot better than her left one. See how it's kind of more curved? I'd suggest making the left one match.

Hope it helps.

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/e1c ... e5b76f4dcc

Her foot is wrong. :I

http://www.neuropod.net/imagehost/uploa ... 06f474.PNG

Another.

Poll up!

vote please.