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TerminX's Spriteworks (Trollbean won State competition!) 
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Conco & Transy
Respectively. Quite badass, if I do say so myself. These take the personalities of the characters above and personify them as best as possible. Though naturally, Transy will need a new name. It just doesn't fit the badass character he is now. Any ideas?
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Oh come on you guys

I thought they looked cool..


I'll start on the one on the left known as Conco.

His legs seem to be too skinny and the crotch is far too high for a normal human. his body is shaded in a way that he has six pack, correct? You don't seem to be doing the outline correct and you should probably make the space bigger so you can add more detail. The left arm is too much skinner compared to the other one, in fact, it looks like how a granny's arm would look like. it looks fragile.
And the anatomy on the right arm is completely off. The arm is oversized in comparison with the arm, the bones on his hand is broken? and his wrist is too weirdly shaped. The jacket IMO should be wider on both sides, the look on his face makes him look like a hobo, and the eyes should be smaller. And his hair needs some touchups on the shading.

And the right one known as Transy.

Again as said, the crotch is too high, but the legs and arms in fact sprited some what correctly IMO. The hands need a LOT more shading and i mean both of them, and you need better "blood marks" (I think) because it really doesn't fit him and ruins the sprite.

90% of what you just commented on was unedited from the original sprite.

Are you arguing with JUS? :P

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Your argument is invalid.

Stop trying to be Evilagram.

Also, the "Blood marks" are a sign of his race. Whose name I have forgotten atm but whatever


Yes i am aruging with JUS. Just because that's how jus made it doesn't mean it's always right. You copy answers of an idiot in a test. You both get the same thing wrong. You don't know how to improve or change. They aren't perfect, and they make mistakes too.

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Stop trying to be Evilagram.


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Yes i am aruging with JUS. Just because that's how jus made it doesn't mean it's always right. You copy answers of an idiot in a test. You both get the same thing wrong. You don't know how to improve or change. They aren't perfect, and they make mistakes too.


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Evilagram wrote:
TerminX wrote:
Stop trying to be Evilagram.


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Yes i am aruging with JUS. Just because that's how jus made it doesn't mean it's always right. You copy answers of an idiot in a test. You both get the same thing wrong. You don't know how to improve or change. They aren't perfect, and they make mistakes too.


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I lol'd so hard

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That's a kneeslapper.

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Cell Revamp
This Cell was not made by me, but by a friend of Elvis's who, imo, has some talent. Not his best work though, so I tried to touch it up. Left is my revamp, right is his original.
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Your revamp is a lot better. Although his head "V" shaped thingy is too thick, IMO.

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Your revamp is a lot better. Although his head "V" shaped thingy is too thick, IMO.

Yeah, I kinda thought so. I also just realized that his tail prolly shouldn't be behind his wing, lol

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can you try and make pikkon now?

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can you try and make pikkon now?

GRR

Not now, I gotta mow

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kk, you dont really have to if you dont want to, just a suggestion.

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You gonna make the other forms too?

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Korah Hyoutetsu [NF] wrote:
You gonna make the other forms too?

Possibly.

It's not my Cell, and I don't know this guy at all, so it really depends on how cool he is with me using his work as a base for mine.

I wouldn't mind were I him, but some people are picky like that.

Either way I'd prolly only make Perfect Form, mid form fails.

*Goes to post on IGN*

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TerminX wrote:
Cell Revamp
This Cell was not made by me, but by a friend of Elvis's who, imo, has some talent. Not his best work though, so I tried to touch it up. Left is my revamp, right is his original.
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Your revamp is definitely better. Good job.

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