TerminX's Spriteworks (Trollbean won State competition!)
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Shounic
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| | | | TerminX wrote: | | | | Shounic wrote: I'll start on the one on the left known as Conco. His legs seem to be too skinny and the crotch is far too high for a normal human. his body is shaded in a way that he has six pack, correct? You don't seem to be doing the outline correct and you should probably make the space bigger so you can add more detail. The left arm is too much skinner compared to the other one, in fact, it looks like how a granny's arm would look like. it looks fragile. And the anatomy on the right arm is completely off. The arm is oversized in comparison with the arm, the bones on his hand is broken? and his wrist is too weirdly shaped. The jacket IMO should be wider on both sides, the look on his face makes him look like a hobo, and the eyes should be smaller. And his hair needs some touchups on the shading. And the right one known as Transy. Again as said, the crotch is too high, but the legs and arms in fact sprited some what correctly IMO. The hands need a LOT more shading and i mean both of them, and you need better "blood marks" (I think) because it really doesn't fit him and ruins the sprite. | | | | |
90% of what you just commented on was unedited from the original sprite. Are you arguing with JUS? EDIT: Your argument is invalid. Stop trying to be Evilagram. Also, the "Blood marks" are a sign of his race. Whose name I have forgotten atm but whatever | | | | |
Yes i am aruging with JUS. Just because that's how jus made it doesn't mean it's always right. You copy answers of an idiot in a test. You both get the same thing wrong. You don't know how to improve or change. They aren't perfect, and they make mistakes too.
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Evilagram
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Mon May 04, 2009 9:21 am |
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Shounic
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Mon May 04, 2009 9:22 am |
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Korah Hyoutetsu [NF]
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That's a kneeslapper.
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Mon May 04, 2009 6:13 pm |
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Shounic
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Tue May 05, 2009 4:04 am |
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Cell RevampThis Cell was not made by me, but by a friend of Elvis's who, imo, has some talent. Not his best work though, so I tried to touch it up. Left is my revamp, right is his original.
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Tue May 05, 2009 4:15 pm |
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Korah Hyoutetsu [NF]
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Your revamp is a lot better. Although his head "V" shaped thingy is too thick, IMO.
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Tue May 05, 2009 4:16 pm |
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Yeah, I kinda thought so. I also just realized that his tail prolly shouldn't be behind his wing, lol
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Tue May 05, 2009 4:22 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
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can you try and make pikkon now?
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Tue May 05, 2009 4:24 pm |
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GRR Not now, I gotta mow Later
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Tue May 05, 2009 4:33 pm |
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Glitch
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kk, you dont really have to if you dont want to, just a suggestion.
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Tue May 05, 2009 4:36 pm |
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Korah Hyoutetsu [NF]
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You gonna make the other forms too?
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Tue May 05, 2009 4:36 pm |
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Possibly. It's not my Cell, and I don't know this guy at all, so it really depends on how cool he is with me using his work as a base for mine. I wouldn't mind were I him, but some people are picky like that. Either way I'd prolly only make Perfect Form, mid form fails. *Goes to post on IGN*
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Eraser
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Your revamp is definitely better. Good job.
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