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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:35 am Posts: 858 
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*OOC: Only two problems. One, capitalization is kinda sparodic. You forgot to capitalize some things. Second, you forgot to press the spacebar in some places where you should have. Other than that, it is good. Care to try your hand at fixing those mistakes?*
_________________  My forums {Draco} the Veron (fire-breathing blink fox) [[Sylver]] the Robotic Dog Story Mode (not to be confused with official SSF2 story mode) Rising Tide: 4 stages complete |
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| Thu Sep 18, 2008 11:17 pm |
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 Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:27 pm Posts: 371 Location: Everywhere and nowhere trying to find my place in life. Gender: Male Currently Playing: Final Fantasy 7, Dissidia Final Fantasy,Tony Hawk UnderGround,Ape Escape On the loose, Ape Escape 2 Digaea 1
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OOC: Sorry
" Finally we got here " says Rock " No thanks to you!! " yells Blues " Hey you lost the frigging map!!! " yells Rock as he casts a fire spell at Blues " Maybe we should look for Esa...  " Says Blues as he sees the fire ball" You are right " says Rock as he runs to find Esa and Joat " Phew now to go and find Detrie and kick his butt" says Blues as he walks in a diffrent direction _________________ "Why use doors? Window's are fun to use when entering and leaving a building" "Reaver, use the damn door or I'm charging all the bills I get from the window repair men to you." "Alright, alright I will, later." *CRASH* "DAMN IT REAVER!" |
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| Thu Sep 18, 2008 11:22 pm |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:35 am Posts: 858
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*OOC: You forgot to wait for me to approve you, but okay. Also, you need to address the fireball. Was Blues hit by it? And where are your characers while all this is going on?*
_________________ My forums {Draco} the Veron (fire-breathing blink fox) [[Sylver]] the Robotic Dog Story Mode (not to be confused with official SSF2 story mode) Rising Tide: 4 stages complete |
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| Thu Sep 18, 2008 11:34 pm |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:27 pm Posts: 371 Location: Everywhere and nowhere trying to find my place in life. Gender: Male Currently Playing: Final Fantasy 7, Dissidia Final Fantasy,Tony Hawk UnderGround,Ape Escape On the loose, Ape Escape 2 Digaea 1
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OOC:let me re do that
Just outside the sandbox " Finally we got here " says Rock " No thanks to you!! " yells Blues " Hey you lost the frigging map!!! " yells Rock as he casts a fire spell at Blues " Maybe we should look for Esa... " Says Blues as he gets hit by fire ball " You are right " says Rock as he runs to find Esa and Joat " Phew now to go and find Detrie and kick his butt" says Blues as he walks in a diffrent direction _________________ "Why use doors? Window's are fun to use when entering and leaving a building" "Reaver, use the damn door or I'm charging all the bills I get from the window repair men to you." "Alright, alright I will, later." *CRASH* "DAMN IT REAVER!" |
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| Thu Sep 18, 2008 11:41 pm |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:35 am Posts: 858
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*OOC: The only problem now is one of realism. How one could continue a casual conversation when he just got hit by the person he is speaking to with a fireball? Then again, with how much your characters hurt each-other, he’s probably quite used to it. Still, he should at least wince or something to that effect, unless the spell waas a quite weak one.*
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| Thu Sep 18, 2008 11:48 pm |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:27 pm Posts: 371 Location: Everywhere and nowhere trying to find my place in life. Gender: Male Currently Playing: Final Fantasy 7, Dissidia Final Fantasy,Tony Hawk UnderGround,Ape Escape On the loose, Ape Escape 2 Digaea 1
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OOC" How may times have they fought in front of everyone you should know by now that they use weak attacks against each other and good night
_________________ "Why use doors? Window's are fun to use when entering and leaving a building" "Reaver, use the damn door or I'm charging all the bills I get from the window repair men to you." "Alright, alright I will, later." *CRASH* "DAMN IT REAVER!" |
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| Thu Sep 18, 2008 11:49 pm |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:35 am Posts: 858
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*OOC: Maybe I would, but you can’t assume everyone else knows that. And I suppose I should head off to bed as well.*
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| Thu Sep 18, 2008 11:50 pm |
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 Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:36 am Posts: 657 Location: Connecticut Gender: Male Skype: miscelanonomous Currently Playing: No games
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Kevin shakes his head at Blues. "Its time for your exams, Pug."
Pug doubles over, and falls down. _________________ Hey |
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| Fri Sep 19, 2008 2:21 pm |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:27 pm Posts: 371 Location: Everywhere and nowhere trying to find my place in life. Gender: Male Currently Playing: Final Fantasy 7, Dissidia Final Fantasy,Tony Hawk UnderGround,Ape Escape On the loose, Ape Escape 2 Digaea 1
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"Pug? Dude it's me Blues from the old Sandbox?" says Blues
_________________ "Why use doors? Window's are fun to use when entering and leaving a building" "Reaver, use the damn door or I'm charging all the bills I get from the window repair men to you." "Alright, alright I will, later." *CRASH* "DAMN IT REAVER!" |
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| Fri Sep 19, 2008 6:20 pm |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:35 am Posts: 858
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“Yes, of course. You made a pretty big sca… er, impression in our minds,” Joat says.
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| Fri Sep 19, 2008 9:23 pm |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:27 pm Posts: 371 Location: Everywhere and nowhere trying to find my place in life. Gender: Male Currently Playing: Final Fantasy 7, Dissidia Final Fantasy,Tony Hawk UnderGround,Ape Escape On the loose, Ape Escape 2 Digaea 1
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"Nice to see you too Joat..." says Blues
" Have you seen Esa? " says Rock _________________ "Why use doors? Window's are fun to use when entering and leaving a building" "Reaver, use the damn door or I'm charging all the bills I get from the window repair men to you." "Alright, alright I will, later." *CRASH* "DAMN IT REAVER!" |
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| Fri Sep 19, 2008 9:30 pm |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:36 am Posts: 657 Location: Connecticut Gender: Male Skype: miscelanonomous Currently Playing: No games
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Pug stands up.
"Now Pug, it has been 1000 years, time to renew your license." Kevin says. "You mean my stats." Pug corrects. _________________ Hey |
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| Sat Sep 20, 2008 9:29 am |
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 Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:28 am Posts: 832 Country: 
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[[Well, seeing as my character doesn't speak English, can I make a new one?
Lance Terrigma Player: NintendoJava Race: Vegrandis vir (Small man in latin. A subspecies of humans often mistaken as elves. The main difference is that beings of the Vergandis vir do not have pointy ears and are always bald.) Class: Swordsman Appearance: Lance stands 2'5". He wears turquoise armor and wields a sword made of steel. Lance has fair skin and no hair.]] |
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| Sat Sep 20, 2008 8:37 pm |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:27 pm Posts: 371 Location: Everywhere and nowhere trying to find my place in life. Gender: Male Currently Playing: Final Fantasy 7, Dissidia Final Fantasy,Tony Hawk UnderGround,Ape Escape On the loose, Ape Escape 2 Digaea 1
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OOC:shouldn't it be a lancemen?
_________________ "Why use doors? Window's are fun to use when entering and leaving a building" "Reaver, use the damn door or I'm charging all the bills I get from the window repair men to you." "Alright, alright I will, later." *CRASH* "DAMN IT REAVER!" |
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| Sat Sep 20, 2008 8:38 pm |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 2:05 pm Posts: 1527 Location: (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*♥:・ﾟ✧
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OOC: Men is several people. Man is one. |
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