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JOE-HILL
Joined: Fri Jul 24, 2015 2:25 am Posts: 21 Country:
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Currently Playing: MKX, Skullgirls, and Smash Bros wii u
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Fri Jul 24, 2015 2:39 am |
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Steven
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Joined: Wed Nov 12, 2008 4:13 pm Posts: 7252 Country:
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Yooooooooooooooooooooooo this stuff is -neat-. It's really good! How long have you been spriting?
I really like the sprites, the style, anatomy, shading and expressions are all consistantly very good. The only points of feedback I'd like to give is that in the first 4 picturest he colours could be a bit brighter akin to the Kratos, Ignignokt and Tyler, I think that'll make them pop out a bit more.
But again I think this is really good, thanks for coming here to showcase your sprites, I'd love to see more.
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Fri Jul 24, 2015 6:20 am |
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Nicko
Joined: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:01 am Posts: 1310 Location: someplace where the kangaroos run wild Country:
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wow these colours are great! i absolutely love these! steven had pretty much said everything i was thinking about saying, but yeah the anatomy and the cartoon style really catch my eye!
i hope to see more of your work in the future!
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Fri Jul 24, 2015 6:35 am |
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Tupilluis
SSF2 Developer
Joined: Wed Mar 12, 2014 11:19 am Posts: 146 Country:
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MGN Username: Killatores
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That style! They look gorgeous, with proper art and personality. Have you thought about becoming a Dev?
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Fri Jul 24, 2015 4:37 pm |
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JOE-HILL
Joined: Fri Jul 24, 2015 2:25 am Posts: 21 Country:
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Currently Playing: MKX, Skullgirls, and Smash Bros wii u
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sorry for the late reply... But thank you all! lately, i have been working on some steven universe sprites/pixel art. please give feedback first, here is garnet.    im trying to get her new suit right.  [thumbup]
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Sun Jul 26, 2015 3:02 am |
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Nicko
Joined: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:01 am Posts: 1310 Location: someplace where the kangaroos run wild Country:
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they look really good! steven looks adorable!!!!!!!!!
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Sun Jul 26, 2015 4:51 am |
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JOE-HILL
Joined: Fri Jul 24, 2015 2:25 am Posts: 21 Country:
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: MKX, Skullgirls, and Smash Bros wii u
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Tue Jul 28, 2015 7:00 am |
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Shine-chan
Joined: Sun Aug 03, 2014 11:08 pm Posts: 1082 Location: Fuck 12 Country:
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MGN Username: Shine!
Currently Playing: Minecraft Bedrock & Roblox
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I love steven universe and I adore your sprite work! Amazing gallery!
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Tue Jul 28, 2015 7:15 am |
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JOE-HILL
Joined: Fri Jul 24, 2015 2:25 am Posts: 21 Country:
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Currently Playing: MKX, Skullgirls, and Smash Bros wii u
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Thank you shine. Here is a smash Demake i created. Its mostly editing and the use of other people's sprites( like the mario and donkey kong, the megaman and ryu, galaga, and the smash icons). I basically just edited them and made them more clean with some AA. The only things that are truly mine(just to clearify) are the DK arm swing, the dust, the pokeball, mario's cape, the player numbers , and the percent sign. Overall, i really enjoyed making this. I would like to make a few more... 
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Tue Jul 28, 2015 9:44 am |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
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holycrap i love your sprites
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Tue Jul 28, 2015 10:47 am |
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JOE-HILL
Joined: Fri Jul 24, 2015 2:25 am Posts: 21 Country:
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Currently Playing: MKX, Skullgirls, and Smash Bros wii u
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Here is a sonic project im also working on...  I threw this this together from my progress. Robotnik  spring bounce 
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Tue Jul 28, 2015 11:05 pm |
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Nicko
Joined: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:01 am Posts: 1310 Location: someplace where the kangaroos run wild Country:
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i love the spring animation, the small lines you used to emphasize the sudden bounce is really effective!
looking at the robotnik, its really great and i love the one where he's holding his left hand up! although with robotnik, he has a very round body that makes him look like an egg. around the crotch area his skinny legs would be underneath his body since it works like that perspectively, in your sprites there are two grey pixels around where his legs connect on the inner side that indicate his legs are at the very front of his body and connect awkwardly
im really bad at explaining things like this so sorry if that didnt make much sense, but the point i was trying to get to was that his legs look like they're connected to the front of robotnik instead of to the bottom of him
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Wed Jul 29, 2015 5:41 am |
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kidicarus29
Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2015 10:04 pm Posts: 120 Country:
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The spring animation itself really doesn't make much sense. The spring shouldn't vibrate at the top, it should go down to at least half of it's fully extended length, and vibrate from there. The reason is that the spring is losing energy, and it will seem much more fluid this way. Hard to put into words, but if you need a visual representation I can help you out.
My only other problem is that there is a stray white pixel in the grass during the time that the spring comes out. It also seems like the blur lines stay too long, but that may just be preference.
Other than those things, it is a very nice pixel.
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Thu Jul 30, 2015 4:50 pm |
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JOE-HILL
Joined: Fri Jul 24, 2015 2:25 am Posts: 21 Country:
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Currently Playing: MKX, Skullgirls, and Smash Bros wii u
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Thank you both for the advice. I am glad you pointed out the issue with Robotnik, i had not thought about that. As for the spring, i completely understand how it doesn't make sense. During the time i animated it, i wanted to add that bounce for extra movement to the spring if that makes sense. As for the white pixel left, it was a careless mistake. Regardless of the flaws, I think the animation turned out well for my first time animating something like that. Here are some Adventure time sprites i had back in 2012 for a sort of mockup... i recently went back and fixed some of them up a bit. tell me what you think...  finn  jake
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Sat Aug 01, 2015 3:15 am |
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Sazh
Joined: Sat Apr 16, 2011 7:39 pm Posts: 1451 Location: Enjoying Life Country:
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Really like your style, keep it up!
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Sun Aug 02, 2015 7:50 pm |
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