YAY! Another update!

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Edit: Epic intro is epic.

QFT

Thanks guys. Please excuse my sudden disappearance. I don't have a computer as I mentioned before, and my brother has been constantly using his. And I've been going out and doing lots of other stuff too. So basically, I probably won't really be able to animate anything till I get my laptop in mid August. Sorry.

Well, it's finally here!

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblad ... Ep%204.swf

Comments & Critiques? There are some things I need to work on towards the end of the preview that I probably know about, but tell me anyways, please.

I like the progression, I was getting anxious for the fight, it's too bad it ended so soon. I thought you were just trying to make a joke or something when that guy was frozen there laughing/breathing or whatever it was he was doing.

Just wondering though, why is the "NintendoFlash Presents" up in the corner at the beginning? Kind of odd placement if you ask me.

And I caught one spelling mistake too, when Snow is giving the background story on Rachel it says "exat" instead of "exact". Also when the guy shoots the arrow at Korah is it supposed to sound like a broken record after the string gets taught? It started skipping or something

I'm good at building tention.

I guess the placement is odd. I've been wanting to change my production name from NintendoFlash to something else anyways.

Nice catch on the spelling error. I forgot about that one. The arrow part was supposed to sound like that.

Eh, intro is mediocre. Move the pivotal axis on the weapon thingy. It's rotating off center.

If the animations on the sprite were better then I'd be more impressed.

Most of us are just spriters and/or common animators (place the sprites in order, set the time and make the gif), so, while telling animation terms (or something else that isn't just a spriting term), write the meaning, please.

Pivotal axis is not an animation term, it's a flash term. Of course I embellished. It's not really called that. It doesn't have a name at all for that matter. In flash move the little circle that the thing rotates around to the exact center of the picture.

, I got it!

For next chapter, can you add a keyboard button that does what clicking the mouse on the arrows does?

The blood could look better. And the idle stance of that main bandit is bleh.

I don't know how. For some reason it doesn't work right.The stance is in the works.

Nice but the parrying is dodgy, he shouldn't keep sticking his sword up then forwards then up then forwards. Also he shouldn't beat his mast er so fast, there should be some struggle, otherwise the storyline is too predictable.

Other than that, nice!

Woot, minor update. Remember you can just click scene III to get to this point.

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblad ... Ep%204.swf

I'm thinking of just uploading just this part to Youtube this week and calling it "Chapter IV part one." And then finishing the rest of it and uploading it as part II in youtube while uploading both parts as one in Newgrounds. The reason for this is that it's been a very long time since a chapter came out, so it's about time I show everyone something. I could also link this video on my newgrounds account. What do you guys think?