This is actual an edited bio for my character for the RPG "light in the darkness" but enjoy anyway..

Name: Deus
(Pronunciation: DAY-ES)

Gender: Male

Race: Neodammerus

Weapons: none, unless you consider his polymorphic ability one.

Appearance: Deus stands very tall, about 6’5 from the tip of his hair like quills (or whatever you would like to call them), he has large semi-muscular, semi-slim build up and has a pitch black, polymorphic skin that covers the majority of his body, excluding his face, his face resembles a white mask with two crimson pupiled eyes, and two black markings above his eyes, he wears a long dark blue sleeveless trench-coat that extends to the lower halves of his calves and has 3 large straps buttoned across his torso.

Personality: Despite his dark, malevolent, and mysterious appearance, Deus is very kind and calm spirit. He hates fighting, and would rather make peace than war. He is also much intoned with Nature, and considers every living thing a blessing and hates to see living things die and will try to save any thing living in pain or in suffering. He also believes in disabling his enemies rather than killing them.

Powers/Abilities: Being a Neodammerus, Deus has an array of powers; his black polymorphic body is 25 times denser than any human skin, he can also transform his arms in sharp scythes or spears as a defense. He also processes demy-god-like speed and strength. He also can use Zengai, a silver-colored energy only used by the Neodammerai, that can be used to heal and even be used as a weapon as a last resort. Deus also has the abilities to read the emotions (and not minds) of other living beings. He is also Immortal by age.

Back-Story:
Deus was part of the Neodammerai, a species that created a great civilization; The Neodammerai built great cities and technologies that were run on the power of Zengai, They were great artisans, and architects, built a complex language system. They were also much intoned with nature and believed that every living thing was sacred, and would give up there own lives to save that of another. They almost succeeded in creating the perfect society….until…they all disappeared, and its unknown what happened to them, except Deus he managed to survive, unfornatly he suffered amnesia, and was only able to recall some memories of his people, and that’s his goal to discover what happened to his people.



Extra Info XD: Deus’s name is an excerpt from the Greek word Deus ex machina meaning appearing at the right time or place to decide the finally outcome.

Pretty Good!

Thank you.

The nini is pleased~ its pretty decent

Again thank you, I actually have a better version in my head, but I couldn't remeber it all.

It's alright! Try to make it long like Nini's lol just kidding

Oh jeez, the original one I had was almost as long as it though.

lol this seems pretty descent! I can't wait to RP against this person whenever I get the chance!

Really? Cool, I actually based him of two characters in an anime.

lol I salute you!

Tank you!

Orly? and you didnt submit it why? >.>

It's better than a lot of the s*** here, but it really isn't "good" IMO.

My computer crashed it....
and then I could only remember parts of it.
2 pages of effort pretty much lost.

and wow Belth actually complimented me. \

Alths was 4 o.o unless you meant Nini's in particular, that was 3. alths was around 1.9k words, Ninis is 1.5k, according to Microsoft word 07.

Just trying to get an idea as to its length. I normally save ever so often while working on anything, incase of comp crashes >,<;, that mustve sucked.