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Eraser
Joined: Tue Feb 24, 2009 12:30 pm Posts: 1728
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The mouth is oddly shaped, and the cheeks aren't right... but other than that it's good!
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Thu Dec 03, 2009 6:01 pm |
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Multi
Joined: Fri Aug 15, 2008 4:51 pm Posts: 2527
Gender: Anime Girl
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You don't need all this shades. And the shadow is wrong for a round shape. There is no perspective whatsoever. Othe than that it is fine I wonder why you made it, hm... D:
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Sat Dec 05, 2009 7:46 pm |
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Kirbyfan42
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:07 pm Posts: 827
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I'm using as many shades as I can, to make it look smoother,... and because I nevr tried it. How should the shading be? There isn't supposed to be perspective.
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Sat Dec 19, 2009 9:55 am |
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Steven
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The eyes are a bit too round shaped for Kirby. As you can see in this picture, they're supposed to be long and less roundish: But maybe you want to keep it like that.
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Sat Dec 19, 2009 10:28 am |
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Multi
Joined: Fri Aug 15, 2008 4:51 pm Posts: 2527
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Shades, they are too much, a waste, and they make the outline look bad. It would be more smoother with less shade, imo. You could use some AAing, maybe? The Shadow could be lower, can't explain right, but like this: Or this: http://oraporra.files.wordpress.com/2009/06/jigglypuff.jpgPerspective, it must have, I mean, it isn't like some things have perspective and some doesn't, like, what? Oh, and, the image Damian showed: Link
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Sun Dec 20, 2009 11:25 am |
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Kirbyfan42
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:07 pm Posts: 827
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Well, the shadow is staying the same, because of where the light source is. I'll lower the amount of shades (I'm just experimenting with new things). I'm keeping the eyes this shape, but I'm definitely going to change the mouth. This whole thing is just for me to experiment with different variables, that I have never tried. Still working on the speed:
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Fri Dec 25, 2009 12:26 pm |
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Kirbyfan42
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:07 pm Posts: 827
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AA practice. 5 shades.
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Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:04 pm |
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Eraser
Joined: Tue Feb 24, 2009 12:30 pm Posts: 1728
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THAT'S what AA is! I get it now. good job ;D
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Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:32 pm |
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Multi
Joined: Fri Aug 15, 2008 4:51 pm Posts: 2527
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Anti-aliasing, you could've just googled it.
The AA is good, but it is too apparent, try to make it smoother.
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Mon Jan 25, 2010 12:25 pm |
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Kirbyfan42
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:07 pm Posts: 827
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Yeah. Haven't done much with AA, so it's still not the best. I try to fix it.
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Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:04 pm |
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Kirbyfan42
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:07 pm Posts: 827
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Tadah! 7 shades. Black isn't used.
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Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:42 pm |
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King of Squids
Joined: Tue Aug 12, 2008 9:17 pm Posts: 682 Location: Liquid space.
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| | | | Kirbyfan42 wrote: Tadah! [ Image ] 7 shades. Black isn't used. | | | | |
OH WAR HAR HAR! I like it.
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Mon Jan 25, 2010 6:32 pm |
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Karrik
Joined: Mon Sep 29, 2008 9:09 am Posts: 697 Location: Southeast Region: Eutopia
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| | | | Kirbyfan42 wrote: Tadah! [ Image ] 7 shades. Black isn't used. | | | | |
they have programs for this, don't waste you time. Its too much, like its blurred.
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Mon Jan 25, 2010 6:54 pm |
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Kirbyfan42
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:07 pm Posts: 827
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Yes, but until I learn how to use those programs, I'm just going to do this. And practice is never a waste. Thanky.
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Tue Jan 26, 2010 9:55 pm |
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Karrik
Joined: Mon Sep 29, 2008 9:09 am Posts: 697 Location: Southeast Region: Eutopia
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Spriting may be about quality, but its also efficiency. It's no good if you cant mass produce. Most of the time practicing isn't a waste. Practicing something usless definitely is. instead of wasting your time practicing that, use it to learn how to use that program.
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