hey nathand123, make more

goddammit man don't encourage him.

f*** off, I'm interested

seriously, it's not that bad

I've seen this done for other games so I had a go at it my self.


(I wanted to put a link to the document but it wouldn't let me)

Super Smash Flash 2
Chapter 1
The crowd screamed as his face appeared on the screen. Thousands chanted, waiting to see him in battle. He finally appeared. Fist clenched, he strutted over to the battlefield and stood, confident he had this in the bag.
Mario looked around at his adoring fans. With their banners, flags; fake hats. He smiled and knew he had to win for them. But his thoughts were cut short as his opponent came walking over to field. He stood ten meters away from Mario, but he could make out every feature with his amazing eyes.
He had tall, muscle structure. He wore a red helmet and goggles. Mario knew who he was instantly.
Captain Falcon. The most famous racer in the world. Of course, many doubted he could be a fighter. Some even mocked him when he said he was joining the tournament. But he shut everyone up as soon as he fought his first qualifying match. All they could find of him was a foot and some fingers after he fought Captain Falcon. After that, no one had treated him lightly. (Who is he? You must specify or indicate someone, otherwise it's just confusing)
Mario knew what he was capable of, but he wasn’t scared. He had breezed through the qualifying stage just as easily. Beating (defeating would work better here) all of his opponents in confident (use another word. You already used confident earlier) style. This is what has made him the favourite with the rookies. Even with his challenging group, no one doubted he would get through. Confidently. (Confident again. Unless you're trying to emphasize something, which I can see you doing, you should change it)
The announcer introduced the two fighters, his voice booming throughout the stadium. The 40,000 strong crowd screamed, shouted and cheered as Mario’s name was announced. He raised a single, gloved hand as a thank you.
A second quieter, but no less intimidating, cheer came for Captain Falcon. He opted to a highly acrobatic thank you, rather than a simple one. Mario knew this was only done to scare him. But he simple smiled, amused by the stupidity (stupidness isn't a word. Even so, stupidity isn't really the right word for this. Foolishness or something related would work better) of his opponent.
The twenty trumpets, one for every fighter in the tournament, rang out. Mario and Captain Falcon turned towards the giant screen to the left of Mario (Falcon's left, if he's facing Mario, would be different than Mario's left. So this would just make it much clearer.) This screen would show everything a fighter needed to know about the fight. The stage. The items. The hazards. As well as the group standings and other result from the day.
Name Fights Wins Losses Points
Tails 1 1 0 1
Captain Falcon 0 0 0 0
Mario 0 0 0 0
Black Mage 1 0 1 0
At the start, the screen showed all the groups as they stood at that moment.
Name Fights Wins Losses Points
Goku 1 1 0 1
Link 1 1 0 1
Peach 1 0 1 0
Sora 1 0 1 0

Name Fights Wins Losses Points
Kirby 1 1 0 1
Lloyd 0 0 0 0
Yoshi 0 0 0 0
Ness 1 0 1 0
Name Fights Wins Losses Points
Sonic 1 1 0 1
Wario 1 1 0 1
Fox 1 0 1 0
Naruto 1 0 1 o
Name Fights Wins Losses Points
Mega Man 1 1 0 1
Donkey Kong 0 0 0 0
Pikachu 0 0 0 0
Ichigo 1 0 1 0





After that, the stage was announced. The whole stadium went quiet as the name flashed on the screen and the announcer boomed around the stadium
“Hidden Leaf Village!”