Well I feel that when I try to RP, I put as much description as I can think of, but then I see some of the really good posts and think to myself "Why didn't I think of something like that in my post?" So what I'm asking for is if you read one of my posts and think I could have added this or that to it, PM me the post and what I could have improved on, so I can take that into account next time when I post.

Please and thank you in advance.

And no I am not completely ripping off Nac's "Help me improve my English" thread

Can you be more specific?

Read a lot of books, or just keep reading other people's posts, most of my ideas are from sources I don't tell anyone.

Well generally the posts by the people in the Pro RPers are the ones that catch my attention


Alright, I think I'll so some research and read some of the really good people's post and study from there

Anything specific about them that moves you? Is it the characterisation?

The fact you guys manage to describe so much makes it something very entertaining to read

I thought I went light on the descriptions though

One person has already accused me of not sparing the details.

I agree with this man, Halsoy, here.

Usually, when I RP, it's usually not planned, and briefly describes what I'm doing. I generally try not to describe the environment, as I'm not too sure of the environment in the RP, and don't want to have my character "Look" at something that isn't supposed to exist.

It's probably because I pretty skim many posts in RPing. This might come back to haunt me, but alright.