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Szerencse
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Kevin
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 6:49 am Posts: 2944 Location: Alexandria, Virginia Country: 
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Currently Playing: playerunknown battlegrounds
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Gookclicker
Joined: Mon Sep 29, 2008 7:36 pm
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I thought the same thing, but decided it was trivial.
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Szerencse
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That is probably because it starts with "no" and the subject is "you." Most sound funny, but it is correct.
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Gookclicker
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It starts with Join, not no...
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Szerencse
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My bad, but its subject is still you, which makes it sound off.
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Gookclicker
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I always thought the "game," part made it seem off.
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Cleod9
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Joined: Sat Aug 02, 2008 4:07 pm Posts: 8058 Location: NJ Country:
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Fixed, and I'll take the "even" out of there, not really necessary Just sounds awkwards because of the placement of etc., perhaps I'll throw it in parentheses _________________ Current project(s):
SSF2 (Working Title) | Percent Done: 90% | Descrip: Sequel to SSF
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Szerencse
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 9:02 am
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I see it I think... The verb usage is singular... Shouldn't it be... "Join user-hosted game s, animation s, art s(lolwut) etc. here!" I would remove contests because that is the problem being plural and all, along with "CONTESTS" being the subforum. I am not sure if it is right though, would like a confirm.
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Cleod9
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I will modify it slightly _________________Current project(s):
SSF2 (Working Title) | Percent Done: 90% | Descrip: Sequel to SSF
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Szerencse
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Works for me.
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Gookclicker
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Without contests, how do you join an "art"?
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| Sat Apr 11, 2009 10:14 pm |
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Szerencse
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That is why I said lolwut. It makes sense for the 1st 2.
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Gookclicker
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But this is the contest section.
You don't join animations or art.
Maybe just say...
"Join user-hosted games, art and animation contests and more here!"
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Szerencse
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Cleod already changed it, and it looks OK to me.
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