Name: Raiku

Race: Half-Demon Half-Angel

Age: Immortal, Appears 29

Time Periods: All

Alignment: Good-Neutral

Weapons:

Rapture: A long, powerful, black Gunblade. It is so powerful that it can shoot dark meteors and black rain.

Appearance: Raiku has long silver hair with a little blue in it and wears a long black and silver coat with green shadings.

Personality: Raiku has a serious but caring personality.

Family:

Father: Gabriel, The Arch-Angel

Mother: Unknown Demon (Deceased)

Bio: Raiku lived in hell, but he got tired of the killing and became a Demon hunter, a person who captures demons. These are all of the demons Raiku has caught in the past: Lust, Gluttony, Greed, Sloth, Wrath, Envy, and Pride. He has two life-long best friends named Raggon & Raggonix.

Abilities: Precognition, Clairvoyance, Tracking, Invincibilty, Phasing, Telepathy, Ice, Levitation, Flight, Demon Powers.
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Name: Raggon

Race: Fire-Master

Age: 33

Time Period: 2008

Alignment: Good

Weapons: Colt Viper Machine Gun.

Appearance: Raggon has medium brown hair and huge muscles. He wears a sleeveless T-Shirt.

Personality: He has a joking but well-meaning personality.

Family:

Father: Unknown (Deceased)

Mother: Unknown (Deceased)

Younger Brother: Raggonix

Bio: He has a younger brother named Raggonix. Their parents died in a fire when Raggon's fire powers first manifested. He and Raggonix are life-long friends with Raiku. He has the power of Fire Manipulation.
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Name: Raggonix

Race: Lightning-Master

Age: 26

Time Period: 2008

Alignment: Good

Weapons: Laptop, Bombs, Machines.

Appearance: Raggonix has medium black hair and glasses. He wears a buttoned-up collar shirt.

Personality: He has a friendly and calculating personality. He is a genius and a master hacker.

Family:

Father: Unknown (Deceased)

Mother: Unknown (Deceased)

Older Brother: Raggon

Bio: He has a older brother named Raggon. Their parents died in a fire when Raggon's fire powers first manifested. He and Raggon are life-long friends with Raiku. He has the power of Lightning Manipulation.

They're all pretty short.

Try going into more depth on their appearance, personality, and bio.
Describe what the coat is like on Raiku for example.

Wow. Raggonix uses a laptop for a weapon.
*schtunk*
Anyways, yeah they're all short. VERY short. At least you put the effort of not putting 'unknown'.

Raggonix's laptop is not a weapon, it is his hacking system.

You need to do a lot more with your bio and laptop is under weapons. If it isn't one, then remove it.