Very good sprites and edits, but i would recommend you something: Don't download Beneton. It has viruses.

really it works fine for it didnt slow my pc or shown any thing saying it had viruses.

It's fine for me too... I think that was an older version.

i think he means the one that was on this topic viewtopic.php?f=11&t=339

update with its half custom.hes shizuo from durarara

isn;t that a fairly new tv series?

You don't have a definite light source... The shading is all over the place.

thanks for the cc ill get to work on that.oh and yes it is a new series here izaya with his clothes from when he fought shizuo with like the 3-7 time

update with black star

On the red shirt, try to make the ruffles in the clothing appear more natural.
On black star, it looks like he's completely flat. Try adding texture to the pants and shirt. Also, his arms seem to be in an awkward position.

thanks for cc ill fix it.okay here is this better ?

The pants are a lot better, but there is too much contrast. Try adding a third color inbetween the super gray and white. The shirt is the opposite though. There is almost no contrast that is visible on the shirt. This is probably only because the color is black, but from my experience black is harder to show contrast in. Just make the jump in shades larger, and again, try adding a third color. On closer examination though the shirt ruffles seem unnatural, and it looks like its covering his face... the arms are more natural looking but still in awkward positions. :/
Like, stand in the position that he is standing in. It seems very awkward.
I hope I'm helping. If anything is unclear, please feel free to ask me to elaborate.

ok ill fix it and thanks again.okay here it is fixed the arm and added more shades to it and made the face more visible here it is any better than the last one.

Try editing the arms of another JUS sprite. Or just look at them i suppose. Your arms look very tube like, and not like arms. It its looking better, and i can see shades in the shirt better, but the ruffles are still unrealistic. And on the legs, his right, our left, the leg looks kinda awkwardly splotched. like a skin disease but on his pants. :/ it doesnt really look like ruffles.
I dont really know how to explain it.