[Another bio, redone] Seth Hirose.
[Another bio, redone] Seth Hirose.
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UnexpectedLight
Joined: Mon Sep 14, 2009 4:11 pm Posts: 53
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Self-commentery put in []
Name: Seth Hirose. [Best I could do, right-on-the-spot.]
Age:17 [Someone here hates child prodigies, right?]
Height and weight: H: 6"2, W: 140.
Personality: Cheerful, yet annoyed at most time, enjoys to spend his time with whoever is with him. [Short and simple]
Background/Past-Experiences: He was born in 1992, with his family in the east, he still resides there, but travels he can go, with permission of course. His brother is off fighting a war currently. His living family in the present are his Father and Brother. His mother perished when he was 6, though it hasn't phased him much, he maintains his cheerful attitude all the while, even while inside he isn't.
Appearence: Blonde, spiky hair, about the size of a full-size-pencil each strand. Wears a katana on his waist, in it's sheath. Currently wearing a soft, black jacket. same color pants, down to his feet. [Again, best I could do, right on the spot.]
Emotional Position: Nothing too serious, at the moment.
Race: American-Asian, Human.. [What I really am, please no racism about this.]
Will be updated. Commentary is appreciated. I will begin roleplay once I have recieved enough commentary.
_________________He desperately searches the reason he goes on in life, though he finds nothing to guide him through his journey, he seeks the help. Though, slowly the truth comes to him: He lives for his friends. 11-26-09Need I say more?
Last edited by UnexpectedLight on Fri Dec 04, 2009 6:24 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Blood
Joined: Sat Aug 08, 2009 1:49 pm Posts: 594 Location: ???????????????
Gender: Male
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| | | | UnexpectedLight wrote: Self-commentery put in []
Name: Seth Hirose. [Best I could do, right-on-the-spot.]
Age:17 [Someone here hates child prodigies, right?]nice call
Personality: Cheerful, yet annoyed at most time, enjoys to spend his time with whoever is with him. [Short and simple]
Background/Past-Experiences: He was born in 1992, with his family in the east, he still resides there, but travels he can go, with permission of course. His brother is off fighting a war currently.please alittle more detail
Appearence: Blonde, spiky hair, about the size of a full-size-pencil each strand. Wears a katana on his waist, in it's sheath. Currently wearing a soft, black jacket. same color pants, down to his feet. [Again, best I could do, right on the spot.]hmm... cloud?
Emotional Position: Nothing too serious, at the moment.seriously this shouldn't exist
Race: American-Asian, Human.. [What I really am, please no racism about this.]o.k.
Will be updated. Commentary is appreciated. | | | | |
i got to say this isn't uhh... bad for someone who made a character right on the spot, follow the bold texting in the box above i hope your next edit will be better.
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Fri Dec 04, 2009 5:34 pm |
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UnexpectedLight
Joined: Mon Sep 14, 2009 4:11 pm Posts: 53
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To be honest, i'm better at roleplay itself, not the bio's.
Oh, and thank you, edited. Cloud doesn't own a katana, though the description is a little close to his. Cloud owns a wide-long sword, otherwise known as the "Buster Sword".
_________________He desperately searches the reason he goes on in life, though he finds nothing to guide him through his journey, he seeks the help. Though, slowly the truth comes to him: He lives for his friends. 11-26-09Need I say more?
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Geno
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Joined: Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:32 am Posts: 11709 Country:
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Currently Playing: Undertale
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...Seth Hirose? ...wtf dude? It sounds like a retarded spanish-Jap Hybrid name >_> Change it to something... Less weaboo ish.
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Fri Dec 04, 2009 6:56 pm |
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Doromac
Joined: Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:01 pm Posts: 271 Location: Partyin ALL NIGHT LONG!!!!!
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No short notice johns in rp bios, son.
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Green Mage
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| | | | UnexpectedLight wrote: Self-commentery put in []
Name: Seth Hirose. [Best I could do, right-on-the-spot.] Bizarre looking, but eh.
Age:17 [Someone here hates child prodigies, right?] 17 is still kinda in the prodigy zone.
Height and weight: H: 6"2, W: 140. Don't feel looking at weight to height scale now.
Personality: Cheerful, yet annoyed at most time, enjoys to spend his time with whoever is with him. [Short and simple]
Background/Past-Experiences: He was born in 1992, with his family in the east, he still resides there, but travels he can go, with permission of course. His brother is off fighting a war currently What war?. His living family in the present are his Father and Brother. His mother perished when he was 6, though it hasn't phased him much Really? Why?, he maintains his cheerful attitude all the while, even while inside he isn't.
Appearence: Blonde, spiky hair, about the size of a full-size-pencil each strand Looking at the nearest pencil, that is LONG. Wears a katana on his waist, in it's sheath A katana. In what seems to be modern times. I'm not gonna touch that. Currently wearing a soft, black jacket. same color pants, down to his feet. [Again, best I could do, right on the spot.]
Emotional Position: Nothing too serious, at the moment. I have no idea
Race: American-Asian, Human.. [What I really am This is starting to sound a self-insert here., please no racism about this.]
Will be updated. Commentary is appreciated. I will begin roleplay once I have recieved enough commentary. | | | | |
In bold.
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Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:30 pm |
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A Cat
Joined: Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:22 pm Posts: 1561 Location: <3 Melty Blud
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Not to bash, but this seems like a typical anime character.
Also, I don't think asians naturally have blonde hair.
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Kittenpuncher
Joined: Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:16 pm Posts: 12685 Country:
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I've seen one, her father was European.
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A Cat
Joined: Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:22 pm Posts: 1561 Location: <3 Melty Blud
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UnexpectedLight
Joined: Mon Sep 14, 2009 4:11 pm Posts: 53
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O-K. That's enough for now, thank you all, I hope enjoy the roleplay world.
_________________He desperately searches the reason he goes on in life, though he finds nothing to guide him through his journey, he seeks the help. Though, slowly the truth comes to him: He lives for his friends. 11-26-09Need I say more?
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