The girl looks a little chubby, but alright.
Who is that other person supposed to be? *The short guy*

Just a random skater kid I made for fun.

the girl look so fat and serious now. wait she suppose to be serious? anyway it look good.

She doesn't even look fat. It's just the style, she looks fine. Props on her hands in this new version, the angle and proportions are perfect.

My only critique is that this newest kid's feet don't look like feet. They look like saucers he's standing on.
Perhaps another pixel vertically would do the trick.

BUMPITY

Alright I'm making a PA at the moment, and I'm having some trouble with the gun.

If any body would help with making the gun, that would be awesome.

Other than that I think it's going pretty good.

The face is p. long, this could be fixed by shortening it or just adding a longer line to the nose.
Other than that.
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/13/unledccj.png/
I added to much detail and had to simplify it a bit because I forgot it was for someone else -.-' either way even if you don't like this particular design you can edit my concepts a bit.

I think I'll wait to see if someone else will do it...

I highly doubt anyone else will... anyways when I get home I can draw a much better one - seeming I'm in CMP SCN right now.

Let's wait till then in, in that case.

I started on a Halo 1 type magnum, but I can try several different types.
Anything in mind?

Ehrr, never mind.

I just did it myself because I got bored.



C+C is appreciated.

I can see that you colored outside of the lines in some places.

I'm sorry I took so long =p I'll complete my ver. anyways because it's going to drive me insane if I don't.
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I really like the pallet for the gun and the little rib part on the bottom of it. Other then that I think it's a bit plain, not necessarily texture wise because I'm aware it's suppose to be basically texture less. You could possibly add pockets of some sort?

Ahhh wait - after typing this I noticed that his left leg is out of proportion. The problem is that his thigh is skinnier then his lower leg, so if I flipped and rotated his leg it would probably lookbetter compared to it's current state.

@Road Hog
That's the style... it's on purpose =] it takes away a lot of the contrast between colours.

If it's a style, it's only in like three places.

You could try flipping it if you'd like.

If it's not perfect I'll just edit it to my liking.