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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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MGN Username: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Skype: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Currently Playing: The game of Life
Waifu: Beruka from Fates
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Hello and welcome to my journey to become an artist of pixels and all. Will update with spritober challenge stuff soon... Robot Reaper!
Last edited by That One Sage on Thu Nov 08, 2018 10:54 am, edited 31 times in total.
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Sun Apr 15, 2012 4:47 pm |
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Cactus
Joined: Mon Sep 08, 2008 5:47 am Posts: 3035 Location: It was I, YOU! Country:
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Skype: Doesn't matter anymore
Currently Playing: SFV-FI: Shenanigans
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The right arm for both characters are a bit floppy and look dislocated from the body, especially the first one, and the hair is a little flat and robot-like. The 2nd one's left leg is thicker than the other one, same with the right foot, if that's just because of the angle it's ok, but....look into it. The 1st one's left arm looks a lot smaller than the other one as well.
But other than that, and the lack of shading that is not needed right now, they're getting there, keep at it.
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Sun Apr 15, 2012 10:35 pm |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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MGN Username: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Skype: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Currently Playing: The game of Life
Waifu: Beruka from Fates
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Thanks, man. I'll keep these things in mind when I make other sprites.
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Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:38 pm |
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iliqnpich
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add nire cilours for the sprites.think goku's sprite is make like yours?BTW you can edit them and them re-post them on ur first reply.
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Tue Apr 17, 2012 7:05 am |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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MGN Username: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Skype: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Currently Playing: The game of Life
Waifu: Beruka from Fates
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I've been improving a little, but I can't post my works yet. Expect an update next week.
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Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:23 pm |
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Steven
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I'm looking forward to it. if you're still in the King of Fighters groove, then could you try Rugal sooner or later?
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Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:20 am |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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MGN Username: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Skype: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Currently Playing: The game of Life
Waifu: Beruka from Fates
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Sure. I'll give Rugal a go.
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Sun Jun 10, 2012 12:49 pm |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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MGN Username: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Skype: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Currently Playing: The game of Life
Waifu: Beruka from Fates
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Added a WIP sprite of one of my OCs, Twilight. Rugal is next. Any other requests?
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Wed Jun 13, 2012 12:45 pm |
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Steven
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Oh good, you've gotten better at proportions! The sprite looks nice, I would suggest adding a bit more of a chin to the head though, and perhaps work out the arms more, so that the elbows are more clear (by perhaps, adding more mucle to the upper arm, you could give that a shot).
Looking forward to Rugal.
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Wed Jun 13, 2012 1:39 pm |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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MGN Username: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Skype: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Currently Playing: The game of Life
Waifu: Beruka from Fates
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Thanks for the C+C, Steven.
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Wed Jun 13, 2012 1:56 pm |
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Suli
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Currently Playing: Fire Emblem 1-13, Tales of Xillia/Graces, Smash 4
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It's looking a lot better than the first two, that's for sure. I would look a bit more into color and the outline, I s'pose, but it's a huge improvement. Character reminds me a bit of Regal from ToS, though.
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Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:00 pm |
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luckycrime
Joined: Wed Mar 09, 2011 2:49 pm Posts: 457
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It's ok. Try to fix the lining pixel by pixel. It might help get the results you want.
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Thu Jun 14, 2012 8:42 am |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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MGN Username: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Skype: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Currently Playing: The game of Life
Waifu: Beruka from Fates
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Thanks for the comments. I'm gonna try and update every week.
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Thu Jun 14, 2012 8:46 am |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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MGN Username: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Skype: SageHarpuiaJDJ
Currently Playing: The game of Life
Waifu: Beruka from Fates
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Sorry for the double post since it isn't an update, but I have a problem. I can't sprite hands or waists correctly. All of my sprites are coming out bad because of it. Any tips on drawing hands and waists?
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Sun Jun 17, 2012 6:28 pm |
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Steven
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Kickstarting problems with hands are best solved by using a lot of reference (even sprited ones). Sometimes it's better to sprite each finger seperatly. Waists are a matter of anatomy. Some styles don't pronounce the difference between the male and female waists that much, but it's always handy to keep it in mind. Usually it's just a progress of trial and error tho, so don't give up. And if you are really lost, post it here so we can help you pinpoint the possible problems.
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Mon Jun 18, 2012 5:22 am |
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