Right, is it a re-write? Or original fiction? I still don't understand your angle. If its the former, don't bother, if its the latter then by all means go ahead, but it could use a whole lot more of an improvement.

u can make a pmd story here too, u know. u should realy check the starting post

So now what? We created the 1st story but what is the second one about? Do we create it as it goes along?

yes,we make it as it goes along. the next chapter is to go on a hunt for the chatot's lost/stolen item

Chapter 2: Chatot's Lost Items

Lucas: Hey, is that...?
Chris: I think it is! It's Chatot's lost items!
Lucas: Or item...

Chris: Ugg... did he make us do that?
Lucas: No idea.
Chris: Let's retrieve that scarf before-
???: Hold it right there!
Chris: WAH! Who's this?
Koffing: I'm Koffing.
Zubat: And I'm Zubat.
Koffing: Haha! Think you can get this scarf from me? Muahahaha!
Chris: Of coarse we can!
Koffing: Heh! Easy win! Poison Gas!!!
Lucas: Thunder Shock!!!!
*Koffing was zapped before he got to release his attack. Koffing fainted*
Lucas: Ha! Take that!
Zubat: Wheh!
*Zubat fled*
Chris: That was... unexpected...
Lucas: But we got the scarf! Lets bring it back!
A while later...
Chatot: Thanks for getting my items!
Lucas: But it's a scarf...
Chatot: But a rare one!
Chris: Well, we're happy for you!
Chatot: And in return, here you go!
*Chatot flees*
Chris: Did he rip us off?
Lucas: I think he did...

ep.2
me: i think i see it!
piplup: finnaly!
me: ? where'd it go?
piplup: maybe someone else returned it
me: maybe. let's leave.
???: hold it!
me: it's!!!.......a treeko?
treeko: i want to join u guys
piplup: ok! wats ur name?
gieco: gieco
me: thats an insurance company name
gieco: yah yah.
*the 3 leave the forest to find*
me: u were right piplup
piplup: O_o
gieco: let's go to our base now.
me: we don't have a base
gieco: now u do
*the 3 pokemon go to sleep at the new base*
???: ..................
me: huh?
???: .......pokech.......
me: wait,come back!

This is barely an RP, but it's definitely not literature. Please resume... whatever you're doing here.

Hmmm... I really can't cross it off as nonsense... ... Damn...

you may not be able to cross it off as nonsense but i sure as hell cross it off as RP.

Moving this to the games corner, its not a story, its not really an rp, but it IS a game.

Can I join?

pokemon: Riolu
name: Nate
gender: Male
side(hero or villain): Hero
personality: Carefree, funny, but can lose his temper if tempted too much.

Picture:

May I join?

pkmn: Minum
name: Linus
gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral good
personality: he goes his own way. doesnt care about anyone (except his sister). he has a mean attitude. but if he's involved with his sister, his personality changes depending on what it is.
picture (look at my avitar)

Sister's info:
pkmn: Plusle
name:Sara
gender: female
Alignment: chaotic good
Personality: she is nice and smart. She always have a dream of becoming a member of a rescue team. she helps out of what she can. and she is a little too emotional

ur both (or all 3) are in

I'll start with my story

(Linus and Sara are walking across the field. Linus has no idea where his sister is taking him, so he asks.)
Linus: Where are we going?
Sara: We're going to meet the rescue team.
Linus: The rescue team. But why?
Sara: Because we need to thank them for what they did.
Linus: Why? All they did is attack the bird, that apparently grabbed me, which causes it to drop me and I landed on a really hard rock.
Sara: Hey! You were being kidnapped and the rescue team risked their lives to save us.
Linus: O.K. So they are a little bit more useful.
Sara: (sigh) Someday, I'm going to be a member of the rescue team
Linus: Sis. we talked about this. It's too dangerous
Sara: Yes but as long as we're in this fo...
Linus: Hold that thought.
(Linus looks at the sky and sees the same strange bird that kidnapped him)
Linus: You may have got me last time but you won't be so lucky this time
( Linus uses growl but he missed, the bird pokemon decends quickly. Linus ducks down. but the bird pokemon wasn't aiming for Linus. Instead it was aiming for Sara. The bird pokemon is taking Sara away.)
Linus: Sara, no!
Sara: Help me, brother!
(Linus tries to follow the rainbow trail that the bird pokemon was leaving behind but it disappeared quickly. After hours of chasing, Linus grew very tired that he can't run anymore)
Linus: I can't believe that bird got away. I shouldn't have ducked in the first place
(Linus was so angry, he has started building electricity on his cheeks and he used thunder wave.)
Linus: (thinking to himself) Be brave sis. Somehow I will rescue you

To Be Continued

Nate's origin :D

Nate was walking down the mountain alongside his master.
Nate: Master, when will I see you again?
Master: Pretty soon, young one, but for now you need to go help out the rescue team.
Nate: Okay, okay, but what about Juwles?
Master: He... isn't ready for the rescue team. He needs more training.
*stops*
Nate: Master, what is it?
Master: here we are.

*both stop to look out*

Nate: *sigh* Well, Master, I guess I have to say... goodbye. I will miss you so much!
Master: And I will miss you too. Young one, go out and use my training wisely! Goodbye!

*Nate runs off to the office*




P.S. If anyone wants to do Juwles, he is another Riolu, trained by Mewtwo. So he has shadow powers. And, later on, he first comes to the rescue team but then crosses over to Mewtwo's base again. So, evil. You can make up his personality.

My story continues

(Linus is in a town to see if anyone have any info on the bird pokemon. He met a Xatu.)
Linus: Have you seen a bird pokemon, that has a trail of rainbow, fly over here.
Xatu: Nope. Haven't seen anything like that, but the rescue team, that lives here, might have seen it.
Linus: The rescue team?
Xatu: Yeah. They are just to the north.
Linus:...
Xatu: What's the matter? Too shy.
(Linus gave a mean look to Xatu. Xatu backed up. Linus started to walk to the north)
Linus: (thinking to himself) Why does it have to be the rescue team. I won't like it, but it is the only way to gather info.
(When Linus was almost to the rescue team's base, he stops)
Linus: (Thinking to himself). Wait. If I go there, the rescue team will definately follow me. And if my sister see me with the rescue team, She will, without a doubt, join the rescue team. I can't let that happen.)
(Then a stranger in the alley talked to Linus)
???: You want to know where the bird pokemon is. Do you?
Linus: Who are you?
???: I'm just a traveler who knows a bit of info about the strange pokemon. First you need to go to the lost woods. I'll meet you when you get past the woods.
Linus: What's in it for you?
???: I'll just sleep better knowing I helped someone. I'll meet you there.
(Linus grabbed and pinned the stranger to a wall)
Linus: Don't be playing games with me. How would I know you won't put me in a stranded place?
???: So you came here to gather info or trying to pick a fight
(Linus let go)
Linus: If you're lying to me, I swear I'll find you and tear you apart.

To be continued