[[Sorry, Nate but it needs to be said. This guy won't allow his guy to be hit, ever.]]

OOC: Better.
Capitalize "Aqua" because its at the beginning of the sentence.
You don't need to capitalize "said".



OOC: He needs to learn that he can't friggin' dodge anything. He'll just be one more n00bish RPer to deal with unless someone shows him the ropes.

Grotesquery had no clue as to what Matt was doing. Apparently, a little big of water was pouring down on him from overhead, but to what effect, the Grotesquery had no clue. That's when it slipped on the stone floor, made slick by the water, and tumbled into one of the opennings in the floor. It grabbed onto the edge and hauled itself back up.

"Okay mayby Glacius wasnt the best choice. Carpe Retractum." said Matt, using the spell to pull himself near his opponent.

By this time, the Grotesquery had recovered its wits. Its arm unwound and it sent the clawed tentacles slicing towards Matt again.

Matt, not seeing the tentacles, slid straight into them. "And now i cant move my wand."

OOC: Hmmm... For the last time, capitalize the word "i".
There should be an apostrophe in the word "can't".
What Matt says really doesn't make much sense here. He doesn't seem to be surprised at all. It should be more like this.
("Whoa!!! What the...?" Matt tries to move his wand, but can't. "I can't move my arm!")

The claws on the tips of the tentacles sliced at Matt, trying to shred him to bits.

"Maybe this will work." said Matt, clicking his fingers. "It....It worked!" He said, producing light from his fingers to blind his opponent.

The Grotesquery felt the energy from the flash, but didn't see it. After all, it couldn't see. This opponent may be more formidable than it first suspected. The Grotesquery charged at Matt, fists held high in the air, with the intentions of smashing him.

"Carpe Retractum, the pulling spell" said Matt, flying near a rock where the wand was pointing at. "Stupefy, the stunning spell" said Matt, trying to stun his opponent

OOC: Okay, really, when you are reffering to a spell, you only need to say its name. Like Carpe Retractum. You don't have to say "the pulling spell".
Don't forget to use punctuation marks. Use some periods in there.

The Grotesquery continued its charge. Having no mind to begin with, trying to confuse it had, literally, no effect. It brandished the stinger on its wrist, ready to impale Matt.

Battle canceled due to CC's perma-ban. Kebin will take place of the Grotesquery.