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dmon600
Joined: Tue Sep 09, 2008 6:21 pm Posts: 281 Location: the world that never was
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In which sprite? The larger one or the smaller one?
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:18 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
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Which one? Or both? And also what is wrong about it? @dmon: the big one
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:23 pm |
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Blitzamirin
Joined: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:51 am Posts: 2014 Location: Paradise Country:
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The second row of sprites.
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:25 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
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... What? I mean which knee, sorry.
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:29 pm |
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Blitzamirin
Joined: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:51 am Posts: 2014 Location: Paradise Country:
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Both, but I'd focus more on the one he is crouching on (bended).
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:30 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
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Alright, and how do you think id fix it?
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:34 pm |
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Blitzamirin
Joined: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:51 am Posts: 2014 Location: Paradise Country:
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The anatomy... It's somehow off. See, the knee is more "rounded" than it should be, maybe giving the foot better outline will work?
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:38 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
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I dont know how changing the foot a different outline would change that... ill just try making the knee less... round?
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:42 pm |
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Blitzamirin
Joined: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:51 am Posts: 2014 Location: Paradise Country:
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Yeah. Not good at explaining (in English, anyway).
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:44 pm |
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Mr. Shoop
Joined: Sat Aug 28, 2010 8:36 am Posts: 1048 Location: Made in China Country:
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Skype: mr.shoop
Currently Playing: Force of Will, League of Legends, Yu-Gi-Oh!
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The poses aren't very good IMO. Maybe something like him standing up iwth crossed arms.
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:50 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
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Thanks for the suggestion shoop, but currently hes finally nearly portraying what id imagined origionally. And not to mention having his arms crossed would be a pretty big safety hazard... Ill only change poses if i absolutely must, but then i have an idea of what i might do. Just curios, blitz, what is your first language? I edited that whole left leg a bit because it seemed that i curved it awkwardly. I also removed all shading on the legs because it is just an eyesore and looks even worse when i upped the contrast. I may end up just re-doing the legs completely. Still not sure though. For now, what do you think? EDIT: god his right leg looks awful....
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:10 pm |
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Blitzamirin
Joined: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:51 am Posts: 2014 Location: Paradise Country:
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:12 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
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Ahh. Yo no hablo espanol excepto por las palavalas ke acavo de de seal. I probably spelled all of that wrong. I am sorry for marring your language. Anywho, does the leg look better?
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:15 pm |
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Blitzamirin
Joined: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:51 am Posts: 2014 Location: Paradise Country:
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Bien bien, no hay que decir lo obvio. Don't worry, I don't mind. The leg looks better by comparison. It needs work, but actually better.
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:17 pm |
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dmon600
Joined: Tue Sep 09, 2008 6:21 pm Posts: 281 Location: the world that never was
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See what you can do with this. This is how I'd pose him and proportion him.
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:20 pm |
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